In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and the measures could be taken to solve them.
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the issues of being overweight but that lead to the decreased in Correct your spelling
about
health
status and being Use synonyms
physical
fit . Replace the word
physically
This
essay will discuss the reasons why these conditions have cause deteriorating of Linking Words
health
and Use synonyms
fitness
level with suitable solutions will be given.
To start with, perhaps the most foremost reasons why Use synonyms
people
were being overweight in some countries these days which cause detriment to their Use synonyms
health
is because they prefer to work at the comfort zones and they Use synonyms
also
engaged more in indoor games . Linking Words
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implies that these modes of work and activities prevent them from being active to shed away excessive fat in the Linking Words
body
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such
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ajority of women who are overweight work from home . Add an article
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people
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life
. Use synonyms
In addition
, consumption of junks and fast Linking Words
foods
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also
been one of the reasons why Linking Words
people
have been overweight. Use synonyms
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were
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were caused
causes
by the consumption of fast food. Correct your spelling
caused
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processed Verify preposition usage
apply
foods
reduce the quality of good Use synonyms
health
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fitness
Moving on to the solutions to be given to curb these problems, Use synonyms
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health
education should be given to Use synonyms
people
on the importance of physical activities. Use synonyms
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means that Linking Words
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being
body
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likewise
more gym Linking Words
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this
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xercise. Another solution which can help to curb these problems is by imposing Add an article
the
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igh rate of tax on junk s and fast Add an article
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foods
. Use synonyms
This
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body
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shown
that the most significant effect on healthy Add the auxiliary verb
showed
has shown
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life style
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lifestyle
health
education. As a consequence, Use synonyms
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a
the
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.
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be achieved
this
essay discussed the causes that deteriorate the level of Linking Words
body
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fitness
and good lifestyle Use synonyms
such
as increase in indoors activities and more eating of processed food Linking Words
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ax on these products and Educating Add an article
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people
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in the country.Add the particle
to
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