In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and the measures could be taken to solve them.
Recently, there is a widespread concern
a bout
the issues of being overweight but that lead to the decreased in Correct your spelling
about
health
status and being physical
fit . Replace the word
physically
This
essay will discuss the reasons why these conditions have cause deteriorating of health
and fitness
level with suitable solutions will be given.
To start with, perhaps the most foremost reasons why people
were being overweight in some countries these days which cause detriment to their health
is because they prefer to work at the comfort zones and they also
engaged more in indoor games . This
implies that these modes of work and activities prevent them from being active to shed away excessive fat in the body
system and in turn have n
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a
health
status such
as cerebrovascular diseases and obesity. For instance
, recent research studies revealed that m
ajority of women who are overweight work from home . Add an article
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Therefore
, these
method had huge impacts on Change the determiner
this
people
's way of life
. In addition
, consumption of junks and fast foods
has also
been one of the reasons why people
have been overweight. This
is because those foods
contain excessive sugars and fatty substances which is d
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health
by causing some life
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hreaten disease Add the particle
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such
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tudy by nutritionist presently compare the damages that junk food had caused and showed that the majority of Add an article
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the
health
challenges were
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were caused
causes
by the consumption of fast food. Correct your spelling
caused
Hence
, it is demonstrated that eating of
processed Verify preposition usage
apply
foods
reduce the quality of good health
and fitness
Moving on to the solutions to be given to curb these problems, firstly
health
education should be given to people
on the importance of physical activities. This
means that been
active will help to shed away accumulated fat in the Change the form of the verb
being
body
likewise
more gym centers
should be constructed, Change the spelling
centres
this
will trigger people
to move out from their homes to participate in e
xercise. Another solution which can help to curb these problems is by imposing Add an article
the
h
igh rate of tax on junk s and fast Add an article
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foods
. This
will aids reduction of purchase on them and healthy life
can be attain
with good Change the verb form
be attained
fitness
of the body
. For example
, r
esearcher Add an article
the
shown
that the most significant effect on healthy Add the auxiliary verb
showed
has shown
life style
was through Correct your spelling
lifestyle
health
education. As a consequence, g
ood lifestyle Add an article
a
the
that is
free from diseases will be achieve
.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
be achieved
this
essay discussed the causes that deteriorate the level of body
fitness
and good lifestyle such
as increase in indoors activities and more eating of processed food also
solutions was elaborated by imposing t
ax on these products and Educating Add an article
a
people
b
in the country.Add the particle
to
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