In my country, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Since the technology has been improved rapidly, it makes our life more convenient.
Plastic
, as one product derived from hi-tech, experiences
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growing popularity in
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ining industry. From my perspective, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks because human rely on its properties heavily and the main
problem
of using
plastic
can be resolved in the near future. On the one hand, the characteristics of
plastic
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overwhelmingly welcomed in our daily life.
Firstly
, the strong covalent bond among atoms and other chemical properties determines it as an insulator that has
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trong heat resistance and the most importance one, anti-corrosion.
That is
to say that those functions can guarantee the freshness and safety of foods, which is beneficial for people’s health. Alternatively, as the polymerised material technology has been advanced to a high than ever, the price of
this
chemical substance is considerably lower than its substitutes, leading to a benefit that all individuals can afford
plastic
containers.
On the other hand
, apart from advantages that
this
synthetic material can bring to people, I personally hold an optimistic view that the main
problem
(non-degradable) of it could be deal with in the
next
few years.
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ajority of chemical learners know, the key reason for
this
property is the bond between
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arbon atom and chlorine bond.
However
, several years ago, scientists attempt to use other atoms to replace chlorine, which can provide similar functions of
plastic
but can be corroded by the soil. Recently, some of
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egradable
plastic
have been already invented by and used by some catering firms.
Thus
, it is tangible and approachable to cope with the main
problem
in a long term. In conclusion,
although
the over-usage of
this
synthetic martial harms the environment, I reckon
this
problem
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for a long time and numerous advantages can outweigh drawbacks completely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • versatile
  • lightweight
  • durable
  • hygienic
  • environmental impact
  • pollution
  • landfills
  • recycling
  • reusable
  • sustainable
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