Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or storage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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intellectuals

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that

accpecting

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accepting

a bad condition is

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ight thing to do while

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others think that

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individuals need to make

efforts

to improve the circumstances.

However

, taking a

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unacceptable

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chance is a short run, in order to improve one should keep making

efforts

is the only way. On the

first

hand, people have to compromise in order to keep the

job

, even though they do not want to do it.

For example

, in some

situtions

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situations

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he or she can not give up on the

job

because

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they need money to put bread and butter on the table for

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amily.

Therefore

, they keep working on the

job

,

this

acceptance could only for a short period of time and they should

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for a

suitble

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suitable

poistion

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position

.

On the other hand

, it is always necessary to make

efforts

for the betterment and keep learning from the mistakes has been made in the past.

For instance

, one of my

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gave IELTS exam three times , he did not

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the

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desired

band score. After that

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he gave up on

this

test and took a

job

as

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lerk in

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ocal school. His cousin motivated him

also

provided a proper

guidence

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guidance

to

acheive

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achieve

a target score. he cracked the

next

exam and he now working in Canada.

Moreover

,he is now motivating others towards their goals. To sum up, taking an

unacceptble

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unacceptable

unacceptably

oppurunity

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opportunity

is not always a bad thing to do. But keep making

efforts

is the only way to get out of these conditions. In my opinion, proper

guidence

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guidance

and working hard is the key

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the improvement.