First some people think that it is responsibilities of governments to take care of the environment while other believe that it is responsibility of the citizens discuss both views and give your opinion

nevertheless
, in present Era clean and green
atmosphere
is vital for
society
segment of
society
believe that it is the responsibility of authority to take care of the
atmosphere
while other points that it is
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esponsibility of the locals I would like to deliver both the arguments before forming an opinion
To begin
with,the
atmosphere
is essential for the
society
to be setting
society
to be clean in the layer of air and ground which is good for
society
maintenance of the earth
atmosphere
is depend mainly by the government to bring
such
laws to take care of
atmosphere
creating
issues
by the public transport are increasing the status of the dirty and harmful
atmosphere
which is not healthy for the
society
for example
traffic on the roads creating noise pollution as well as pollution Hans government might bring some laws to be controlled
such
atmospheric
issues
On the other hand
issues
of atmospheric is increasing which is not good for the
society
so citizens should
also
help to maintain or control atmospheric
issues
by giving contributes
such
as use public transport to visit places and by avoiding the plastic bad which is the worst stops and use product which is recyclable for the more manufacturing of products are in larger scale creating the
issues
of atmospheric by reducing the production in less amount and working time of factories
thus
citizens have to aware of atmospheric
issues
and help to reduce it To conclude considering all the points mentioned above government must bring some laws to reduce the atmospheric
issues
but
also
citizens of
society
may
also
aware of that and create
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental policies
  • sustainable practices
  • legislation
  • regulation
  • green technologies
  • recycling
  • energy consumption
  • grassroots movements
  • framework
  • incentives
  • conservation efforts
  • significantly
  • collective
  • facilitate
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