These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree
In these years, the
violence
is surrounded to children everywhere on television
or advertisements also
in their daily life; these kinds of scenes influence their behaviour
negatively. I completely agree on this
point of view, and I will discuss that in this
essay below.
In the beginning, there are many reasons to explain why I agree with that, the violence
scenes increased and that impact on the number of crimes in the community. Firstly
, that is
clear to see students' behaviour
in schools more violent than the last
decade because they try to imitate the actors they seen on video. For instance
, in Egypt, many students follow the wrong reactions what they see in the series of television
shows. Secondly
, the increased violence
views everywhere caused to the crime rate increased in these days. Thus
, society suffers a lot of violence
which that impact on children's and adults' behaviour
.
In addition
, many people argued that the government should monitor anything present on television
to avoid those kind violence
scenes. In other words
, if governments and communities spend more power to filter what our offspring see on television
, the number of violence
and crime will reduce in society. For example
, according to an article published in Al-Ahram newspaper, the monitoring of all television
shows lead to a decrease in the amount of violence
in the community. Therefore
, government, communities and people should give hand to avoid violence
spread around children.
In conclusion, the violence
views increased on videos and games shown on offspring in this
century and that lead to an increase in the violent behaviour
of these youngsters. In my opinion, to rising up a new generation with balanced behaviour
should reduce the number of violent views shown on video.Submitted by yasseryousefabozaid on
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