In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why they do so and what the outcome of this situation is?

I am writing
this
letter to tell you that it would be impossible for me to watch the Spiderman movie at Regal Cinema
tomorrow
in the evening. I am really sorry my friend ! I never wanted to miss
this
chance to spend time with you
tomorrow
, but, some important project work has come up in the morning which needs to be completed by day after
tomorrow
.
This
assignment is very important to me as it can impact my overall grades of the degree. If I am able to perform well in
this
task, my total percentage in
the
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graduation would increase.
This
can ensure me to cross the threshold marks for sitting in the placements at the end of
this
semester. I want to tell you that Ed is now available
tomorrow
as he was earlier busy with their parents who
has
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left today. When I asked him, he is quite interesting to watch the movie. You can contact him and make plans
accordingly
. Hope you understand the circumstances. With love Alex
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