According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?

Tourism is considered

as

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the

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essential part of

the

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developed and

under developed

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underdeveloped

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countries. Most of the popular

destinations

in

nation

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the nation

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would see an increased revenue on popular tourist

destinations

.

therefore

, in the following

essay

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i

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would

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be discussing

about

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tourism and how it

differ

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differs

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from

past

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and future, and

thus

conclude with a

resonable

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reasonable

opinion.

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, in

present

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modern

would

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world

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every one

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everyone

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is busy with their work

pressue

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pressure

and schedule, even though they are with family or by themselves they are more connected to

the

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electronic devices and there

would be

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less interaction with each other.

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, there

numerous

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facilities at the holiday destination that could be summoned with a phone call.

In

contrast

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this

makes tourists travel straight to their

destinations

once they have landed. In

additionto

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addition to

this

some travellers would treat the place as

an

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hostile and would not explore places. Unlikely in the past the technology was 1960s and 1970s there was no

technology

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development,

this

made many

peope

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people

to

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explore new places in new cities,

learn

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and learn

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about culture and languages.

Inspite

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of

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these

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this

interactions

this

would give them satisfaction about learning new things and

also

buy

an

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product as

rememberance

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remembrance

of the trip.

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consider "Hyderabad"

its

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is

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considered

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the most vibrant city in the world, and

also

attracts more tourists every month, people always host cultural activity all are invited. In my opinion

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this

prespective

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perspective

may

ary

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vary

from person to person based on their point of view.

To conclude

, travellers are always

intrested

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interested

to see

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in seeing

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new

destinations

,

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and

explore

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exploring

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new

culture

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cultures

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, it generally depends on how they interact with other residents.