Some people believe that governments should spend money on the arts. Others assert that this money should be used to improve public services and infrastructure. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The opinions of people on whether the

governmental

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resources should be attached, divided into two groups; Some people think that government resources ought to

be spend

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on

arts

, while others believe that spending money on improving public services and infrastructure will be

b

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etter way of usage that wage. Even though the sponsoring

arts

can boost

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conomic and cultural situation of the nation, in my opinion

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the capital of the country should

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on

c

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omfort and happiness of the

citizens

. In a few people’s opinion

arts

is

the

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good place to put government capital in. Because that move will progress

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ountry’s culture and language, which will lead to cultural boost at the international level

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and elevate the economic situation, by increasing the number of tourists and

citizens

.

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, Japan raises up

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economy after World War 2 by investing in the cinematography, music, and comic books. Since

then

,

the

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Japan’s General Domestic Product increased up

for

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210%. But another group of people think that enhancing public services and infrastructure will be the most relevant way of using the fund. Because it will provide comfort and make better the everyday life of

citizens

.

For instance

, when in my city Aktau, launched new buses, it started to be more comfortable to go somewhere, than before. In conclusion, even though

arts

increasing the

economic

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of the country, the government capital that funded by taxes of

citizens

, should

be spend

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on public services and infrastructure because it will improve

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veryday life of taxpayers.