Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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working to meet their ends.

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leaves their children to be the responsibility of others which

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raises a question that who should take care of them. Few parents want their children to be looked after by their closest family members whereas remaining choose to send them to daycare centres. I am in the opinion of the former part of the question and discuss

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ew points in

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essay to justify my support.

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with, children should be left with someone more reliable and those who could give

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undivided attention to the kinds. These days several incidents are reported where

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hild is molested by the strangers which is a matter of concern.

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, a report has suggested that 1500 cases of sexual misconduct were reported against childcare

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puts them into a vulnerable situation which can invite many threats.

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, parents can take a sigh of relief if they leave their ward in the custody of someone who belongs to the same clan of bloodline

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as grandparents. They would nurture the

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with utmost love and the attention would be more concentrated.

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, they can pass on certain values to the

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while growing up and

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makes the kid more connected with the family.

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, a daycare

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very expensive and can make a hole in the pocket.

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, lead to limited savings and a single parent might not even be able to afford it.

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, it would not be considered as an ideal option to safeguard a

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should be left with their closest family members, perhaps, a grandparent who could enjoy their

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days with their grandchildren while caring and showering utmost affection to them.