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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Every individual in a family
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 working to meet their ends.
This
 leaves their children to be the responsibility of others which
further
 raises a question that who should take care of them. Few parents want their children to be looked after by their closest family members whereas remaining choose to send them to daycare centres. I am in the opinion of the former part of the question and discuss
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ew points in
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 essay to justify my support.
To begin
 with, children should be left with someone more reliable and those who could give
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undivided attention to the kinds. These days several incidents are reported where
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hild is molested by the strangers which is a matter of concern.
For instance
, a report has suggested that 1500 cases of sexual misconduct were reported against childcare
centers
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.
This
 puts them into a vulnerable situation which can invite many threats.
On the contrary
, parents can take a sigh of relief if they leave their ward in the custody of someone who belongs to the same clan of bloodline
such
 as grandparents. They would nurture the
child
 with utmost love and the attention would be more concentrated.
Moreover
, they can pass on certain values to the
child
 while growing up and
this
 makes the kid more connected with the family.
In addition
, a daycare
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 very expensive and can make a hole in the pocket.
This
 would
further
, lead to limited savings and a single parent might not even be able to afford it.
Therefore
, it would not be considered as an ideal option to safeguard a
child
. In the conclusion, a
child
 should be left with their closest family members, perhaps, a grandparent who could enjoy their
last
 days with their grandchildren while caring and showering utmost affection to them.
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