Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been known for some time now that a move towards sources of

energy

which are not carbon-based is urgently required to stop the effects of global warming. In my view, there are too few

governments

who seem to be promoting the

use

of other types of

energy

such

as

wind

, wave, solar and nuclear sources of

energy

.

Governments

at present are too reliant on

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, oil and gas.

Although

some

governments

are doing research into the

use

of alternative

energy

sources, many are not.

Energy

from the

wind

, the sea and the sun does not pollute the environment and is an everlasting source of

power

. Nuclear

power

is clean, and

although

it is not totally unproblematic, it would provide a large amount of

energy

and dramatically improve the environment. Countries

such

as France have made good

use

of nuclear

power

. My feeling is that more

use

could be made of

wind

power

. In some countries, there has been a reluctance to

use

wind

turbines, even in areas which are not densely populated, as some people believe they are eyesores. Personally, I believe they are not only useful

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but beautiful as well.

Governments

should spend more time and effort promoting the benefits of

this

source of

energy

and trying to make the public understand the reason for

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. In conclusion, I believe that, if

governments

forced everyone to have a

wind

turbine and solar panels

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the building they live in, made more

use

of wave

power

and built more nuclear

power

stations,

then

they would manage to avert the dangers that are seriously threatening the Earth.