A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the present moment sadly people tend to judge others by their social and financial status , whereas before the personal skills and trustworthy persons were more appreciated . From my point of view , kindness and emotional values are more important than the material
possesions
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essay will discuss both views and reach a conclusion . On the one hand , nowadays wealth is promoted at
large
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scale in social media and
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unfortunately
the young generation is inspired by the glamourous
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presented by their role model .
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, they believe that a financially potent
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is fulfilled on the professional plan as well as the emotional one .
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, the individuals who display a high social status could
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be seen as a source of inspiration for the ones that are not at the same level .
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, Jeff Besos the
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of Amazon has 1 million followers on Instagram , not because he has an admirable physical image , but because he is the richest
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in the world .
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, the
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is far from being true because
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public individuals are only showing the results but not the process .
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, in everyday's life kindness is the most important quality that a
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could hold ,
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youngsters should be educated to recognise a
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genuine
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. To continue , taking into consideration the ongoing problems world-wide at the moment , a clear example of kindness is the volunteers around the world , who are working without any financial reward , to help the less fortunate citizens from the poor countries .
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, any material goods could be bought but , being able to trust someone in my opinion is the best achievement in life . In conclusion ,
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the social status could be a
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classifying
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factor for some individuals , I believe that
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old-fashioned values should be more appreciated and valued .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social status
  • material possessions
  • judged
  • old-fashioned values
  • perception
  • worthiness
  • external indicators
  • internal qualities
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