A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the present moment sadly people tend to judge others by their social and financial status , whereas before the personal skills and trustworthy persons were more appreciated . From my point of view , kindness and emotional values are more important than the material

possesions

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.

This

essay will discuss both views and reach a conclusion . On the one hand , nowadays wealth is promoted at

large

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a large

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scale in social media and

unfortunatelly

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unfortunately

the young generation is inspired by the glamourous

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presented by their role model .

Therefore

, they believe that a financially potent

person

is fulfilled on the professional plan as well as the emotional one .

Moreover

, the individuals who display a high social status could

also

be seen as a source of inspiration for the ones that are not at the same level .

For instance

, Jeff Besos the

owener

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owner

of Amazon has 1 million followers on Instagram , not because he has an admirable physical image , but because he is the richest

person

in the world .

Nevertheless

, the

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is far from being true because

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public individuals are only showing the results but not the process .

On the other hand

, in everyday's life kindness is the most important quality that a

person

could hold ,

thus

youngsters should be educated to recognise a

geniune

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genuine

person

. To continue , taking into consideration the ongoing problems world-wide at the moment , a clear example of kindness is the volunteers around the world , who are working without any financial reward , to help the less fortunate citizens from the poor countries .

In addition

, any material goods could be bought but , being able to trust someone in my opinion is the best achievement in life . In conclusion ,

although

the social status could be a

classifing

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classifying

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factor for some individuals , I believe that

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old-fashioned values should be more appreciated and valued .