A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the present moment sadly people tend to judge others by their social and financial status , whereas before the personal skills and trustworthy persons were more appreciated . From my point of view , kindness and emotional values are more important than the material
possesions
. Correct your spelling
possessions
This
essay will discuss both views and reach a conclusion .
On the one hand , nowadays wealth is promoted at Linking Words
large
scale in social media and Add an article
a large
unfortunatelly
the young generation is inspired by the glamourous Correct your spelling
unfortunately
life-style
presented by their role model . Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Therefore
, they believe that a financially potent Linking Words
person
is fulfilled on the professional plan as well as the emotional one . Use synonyms
Moreover
, the individuals who display a high social status could Linking Words
also
be seen as a source of inspiration for the ones that are not at the same level . Linking Words
For instance
, Jeff Besos the Linking Words
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of Amazon has 1 million followers on Instagram , not because he has an admirable physical image , but because he is the richest Correct your spelling
owner
person
in the world . Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
really
is far from being true because Replace the word
reality
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this
public individuals are only showing the results but not the process .
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these
On the other hand
, in everyday's life kindness is the most important quality that a Linking Words
person
could hold , Use synonyms
thus
youngsters should be educated to recognise a Linking Words
geniune
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genuine
person
. To continue , taking into consideration the ongoing problems world-wide at the moment , a clear example of kindness is the volunteers around the world , who are working without any financial reward , to help the less fortunate citizens from the poor countries . Use synonyms
In addition
, any material goods could be bought but , being able to trust someone in my opinion is the best achievement in life .
In conclusion , Linking Words
although
the social status could be a Linking Words
classifing
factor for some individuals , I believe that Correct your spelling
classifying
classified
the
old-fashioned values should be more appreciated and valued .Remove the article
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