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Schools offer a wide range of courses such as physical education ,music, Economics, Philosophy, mathematics, English, geography, physics and history. Among all there subjects. Which one do you think is the most important and which one is the least important?

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In a scheme of general education student get the opportunity to study several subjects,
such
 as science ,history,
philosophy
,
English
 and other Languages, Among all these subject, the study of
English
 must get more important because
language
 skills are indispensable for person's success especially in the change global scenario. Perhaps.the least important subject to be taught at school is
philosophy
 simply because while teaching
language
 and history, the student can learn the basics of
philosophy
To begin
 with, the teaching of
English
 assumes Importance everywhere and
this
 is evident as globalization becomes a reality,
For example
.
English
 has acquired the global importance of international business communication and financial dealings. China, Russia, Japan and even European countries have started massive
English
 education programmes as
English
 is the
language
 of business,trade and commerce. The main function of a
language
 is to communicate ,and
English
 is by far the only international
language
 used worldwide.
Moreover
, the flexibility of
English
 enables it to adapt worlds and phrases liberally from other languages
language
 ,
In addition
 to that,it is the richest
language
 in term of literature and vocabulary, and today
English
 words are there in almost every
language
. In the field of Science, technology, and even international media, the significant of
English
 is on the increase, It is the
language
 of progressive and knowledge base economics of the world, Around eighty per cent of all published material is in
English
. To Sum up, school education aims at giving children basic information about everything. Of all the subjects the study
English
 Should be given priority because to succeed in
this
 dynamic world.
English
 proficiency is highly required. And to my mind, the most unimportant subject to be taught at school is a
philosophy
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