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Many people opine that all university students should study whatever they like, whereas some people think the university should teaching some subjects that only related to science and technology for students.

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A number of people agree that
students
 in college should have the right to
study
 whatever they are interested in.
However
, some people do not agree with these arguments, they believe that studying
subjects
 that are beneficial for the
future
 is more vital.
This
 essay will discuss both of the arguments and my own opinion. To start off with, some of us believe that it is a student's right to choose what
subjects
 they would like to
study
.
This
 is one of the most essential methods to keep
students
 learning those
subjects
 because they have a passion for them and will strive their best in those areas. If they choose the
subjects
 that they do not like, they will eventually get bored and do not have the zeal to educate themselves anymore.
However
, there are still some of us who strongly agree that university
students
 should learn some
subjects
 that are useful in the
future
.
For example
, science and technology, because communication, work and education cannot live without technology. It is important for
students
 to
study
 these useful
subjects
, as they are very crucial, especially for making something new and creative in the
future
 days. In conclusion, I strongly believe that university
students
 should choose what they want to
study
 in the
future
, they absolutely should not be forced to choose a subject. Because I personally think every subject is necessary and has its importance. No matter in the
future
 or now, each subject has its own role in our world.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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