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Attitude is as important as knowledge in a test situation. To what extent do you agree?

#attitude #test #situation
Some society thinks that testing events are influenced by attitude more than education. I strongly disagree with the statement because the ability
of testing
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 information is the same important as the nation's relation to details. On
other
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 hand,
a
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 psychological condition of crowds influences
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their tests
due
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to can change
results
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the results
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 of it. So
community
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 who have
an
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 enormous
experience
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 give some recommendations as to relax before exams and it is one of the best effective methods for preparing in comparison with
studding
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studying
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 all
nights
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. Without sleeping tested population become panic or other kinds of nervousness which
block
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 our thoughts within testing time.
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, the national statistic of testing pupils showed that children took a good assessment without fear
to give
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 up and it is better in comparison with the tired kids
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 were worried all the time.
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, motivation as a form of attitude helps to be ready before tests because tested children program themselves for success.
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,
school
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 of international education demonstrated results that children were more confident during testing when they had watched a
motivation
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 movie. On
one
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 other hand, the ability is the same important part to be ready for testing because all
family
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families
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 start from the learning process. Out of specific information
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 the subject, we can't pass
examine
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.,
Consequently
 they increase
their
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 level of the brain. In conclusion, insight and attitude are both
the
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important part
for
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of
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 testing and
population
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the population
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 have no
rights
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right
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 to separate these forms of
preparing
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.
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