Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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activity whilst others believe that it has both advantages and drawbacks. This
essay presents that advertisement is the primary agent for this
cause and econimic
hardships if the greatest effect it has on the person and community with a reasoned conclusion.
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economic
economics
To begin
with, commercials play a significant role in increased purchasing habbit
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habits
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Moreover
, because of the convincing advertisements, several people think that if they posses
certain things or wear trending clothes, they are respected in the society. Correct your spelling
possess
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, numerous citizens go shopping to buy those things on
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. For example
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people
shoping
to buy a product, they saw in an advertisement.
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shopping
On the other hand
, this
pattern causes financial hardships to the individuals and the
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a loan
other
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habbits
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habits
This
action puts them under a financial debt that they cannot repay. To exemplify, most of the college students buy new clothes every week with a credit card, eventhough
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even though
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. Hence
, the shopping trend has negative effects overall on our community.
In conclusion, purchasing new things has become highly
popular activity in the free Add an article
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of the individuals as a result
of the advertisements on different media and it has counter
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