It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children ?

Children
are a strength of our world and world level development depends upon their actions and their creativity. It is very important to teach them good things which helps society become better.   Am totally agreed to give a
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children
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to learn
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thing but
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punishment
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upon moral values
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a
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physical
punishment
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punishment
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to increase their ethics value.
Children
mind is not a very sharp mind, they
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less as compare to developed mind so giving them a light
punishment
helps to change their
behavior
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towards good things.I saw some news that parents gave a physical
punishment
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adults and even in schools
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totally unacceptable. According to me , a
punishment
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to be
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person and more responsible toward
society
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a society
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that
punishments
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and In schools,
teacher
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can use to give them a ground running
punishments
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children
to become a fit person and they can give them
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punishments
like preparing a speech on
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topic in assembly. In a nutshell, light
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opomistics
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optimistic
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of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Moral development
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Disciplinary methods
  • Corporal punishment
  • Psychological effects
  • Authoritative parenting
  • Permissive parenting
  • Behavioural correction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Legal frameworks
  • Cognitive development
  • Social norms
  • Character building
  • Restorative practices
  • Authoritarian approach
  • Constructive criticism
  • Pro-social behavior
  • Conditioning
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