Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been a significant rise in

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criminal activities, in several nations.

However

, an array of masses favours the notion of detention to criminals and others consider adequate to proffer employment opportunities. Ideas related to both views would be captivated in the following paragraphs. There are a plethora of reasons behind supporting conviction in context to offenders. When they would be declared

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guilty

in the court airing, the involvement of the criminals in offensive

activites

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activities

would swell because

this

practice would make them fearless.

As a result

, after absolving from jail, they would stimulate innocent civilians who reside on a breadline by alluring them with fruitful finance and would make their gangs larger by inciting them to join the same.

For example

, if a gangster gets 8 years jail after performing severe heist

then

after absolvation, he would make his gang even more strong by inviting disadvantageous folks who are already discarded by the society.

Nonetheless

, as

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has a

birth right

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to obtain a lease on life, the

convictors

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convictions

conviction

convectors

should

also

be heaved a sigh of relief by the higher authorities after

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determining

the cause behind illicit deed because in most of the rudimentary nations, majority of populace dwells below the poverty line and sometimes it becomes a herculean task for them to earn bread and butter for their families due to illness and finance crunch.

Therefore

,

this

sort of condition provokes them to commit

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.

Thus

, it is a liability of the legislators to offer them

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employment opportunities in their fascinated field of profession.

Therefore

, they would be potent enough to live hand to mouth and

this

situation would automatically prevent them to be miscreant. To conclude,

although

, the government

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should

could

provide severe conviction to the miscreant people, yet the importance of providing them with a breath of fresh air after absolvation cannot be neglected.

Thus

, the councils should provide detention to offenders according to

severety

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severity

of their

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.