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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditiond are difficult, such as the Sahar desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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People
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 always want to explore new
places
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 Earth.Nowadays, A noticeable growth has been observed in
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 in
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 visiting
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 where climate conditions are harsh.In
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 visitors who
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 these
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. Tourists
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places
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 like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic to enjoy the natural beauty of these
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.Whenever someone is close to nature he/she feel more peaceful and relaxed which in turn is beneficial for their inner peace.
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, a number of
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visit
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places
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 to make benefit out of wildlife of these
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.For many , it's their job to capture the unexplored wildlife moments and they get a handsome amount for these pictures and videos when they sell it to media houses.
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, there are some negative consequences as well for visitors when it comes exploring these
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.Due to harsh
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 it becomes really challenging for many individuals to survive in
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 the immediate medical facility is one of the major challenges in
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 regions.
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,
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places
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 lack basic amenities like restaurants and hotels forces
people
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 to stay in tents and make their food which may result in wildlife injury. To conclude, there are both positive and negatives aspects associated with tourists who want to
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 one should be well prepared to face the challenges and the advantages which are the part of these kinds of journies.
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