In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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years, all
people
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will
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online
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instead
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paper
information
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without any extra paying. I agree that
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will be not necessary stuff in the future life. One justification is that globalization.
Every day
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people
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more and more be able
use
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internet
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the internet
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without any warns. Even elderly ancestors try to use these new technologies. Citizens can exchange with
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from their countries to another.
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,
people
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who sell
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might have got
information
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from the websites.
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, it is will be useless to pay extra money for
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.
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,
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might
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,
people
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every now and
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could encounter with poorness and they could not buy
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a radio
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, or smartphone to take news from it, so they must purchase paper variant,
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however
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it is impossible
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because
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people
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could have radio borrowed or just have been invited by
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. To sum up all arguments above, I am comprehensively convinced that in the subsequent
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newspapers will be useless and wasted money.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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