Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

These days,there has been a heated argument about environmental pollutions from car exhaust.Some people believe that
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the fees on oils can solve
this
issue while there are others who do not think that. From my own point of view, I think it will help to sort out
this
problem. On the one hand,
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fuels
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one of the most reason lead to environmental problems and global warming ,
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the same time considered the main vital material all over the world.To clarify, without fuels the
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and
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productivity for any countries will be very low .
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, Saudi Arabia of
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the rich countries because they are used
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way , which are
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most of our life .
On the other hand
,
this
does not mean that the negative side should be neglected.
Firstly
, the more vehicles in the street the more air pollution will be especially in the capital city .Take India as an instance, the
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conducted by the university of India have been shown that the cities with
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population rate and traffic congestion more like to have these problems.
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a lot of
neagative
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negative
impact on the environment and on each individual ,
such
as global warming and some respiratory health disease.       To sum up , after analysing both sides of the argument it is not hard to see that the proper management and increase
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can
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the pollution and use other renewal alternatives
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as bicycle and public transportation can
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  • Environmental preservation
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Green technologies
  • Alternative energy sources
  • Renewable energy
  • Fuel-efficient vehicles
  • Electric vehicles (EVs)
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic impact
  • Consumer behavior
  • Disproportionate effect
  • Government subsidies
  • Comprehensive policies
  • Cost-effective solutions
  • Carbon footprint reduction
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