Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
These days,there has been a heated argument about environmental pollutions from car exhaust.Some people believe that
increase
the fees on oils can solve Replace the word
increasing
this
issue while there are others who do not think that. From my own point of view, I think it will help to sort out this
problem.
On the one hand, the
fuels Remove the article
apply
is
one of the most reason lead to environmental problems and global warming , Change the verb form
are
but
the same time considered the main vital material all over the world.To clarify, without fuels the Verify preposition usage
atbut
economic
and Replace the word
economy
the
productivity for any countries will be very low . Remove the article
apply
For example
, Saudi Arabia of of
the rich countries because they are used Remove the redundancy
apply
this
in
Correct your spelling
ineffective
effective
way , which are Change the article
an effective
impact
Change the form of the verb
impacting
the
most of our life .
Remove the article
apply
On the other hand
, this
does not mean that the negative side should be neglected.Firstly
, the more vehicles in the street the more air pollution will be especially in the capital city .Take India as an instance, the last
studies that
conducted by the university of India have been shown that the cities with Remove the determiner
apply
high
population rate and traffic congestion more like to have these problems.Add an article
a high
As a result
, there are
a lot of Change the verb form
is
neagative
impact on the environment and on each individual ,Correct your spelling
negative
such
as global warming and some respiratory health disease.
To sum up , after analysing both sides of the argument it is not hard to see that the proper management and increase the fuels cost
can Change to a genitive case
the cost of the fuel
the cost of the fuels
declined
the pollution and use other renewal alternatives Change the verb form
decline
such
as bicycle and public transportation can helped
.Change the verb form
help
be helped
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