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We are wired at all times. Smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world. More than its advantages , it is seen as distraction. How badly is your society influenced and what solutions are to stay away from this device? Discuss.

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Nevertheless
, technology play's a vital role in our life. A segment of society believes that
smartphonesphones
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smartphones phones
 have changed the path we
communication
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 with the individual on the earth.
However
, a
counter argument
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 is that it is
seen
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 an attraction and our society influenced by these gadgets day by day.
This
 essay would delve into both the benefits and drawbacks of
such
 a measure.
To begin
 with, these days smartphone become
the
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 essential part of every individual. In our society parents are influencing our childer to use mobile
phones
. People use mobile
phones
 during driving and owing to
this
 their mind diverts and accident wane. It
also
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effects also
 affect our heart and brain.
Thus
, they are harmful to us.
On the other hand
, there are numerous path to resolve
this
 obstacle.
Firstly
, the government should make strict laws and a huge amount of fine to not use a mobile phone while driving, and
also
 send into them in prison if they don't follow the rule.
Furthermore
, parents should
also
 avoid to give gadgets to their children and indulged them into physical activities rather than playing games on
phones
 and computers.
Hence
, there are ways to reduce the usage of mobile
phones
. In conclusion, I believe that we should run mobile
phones
 to some extent.
however
, plurality usage of mobile occurred to serious health problems.
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