Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that most countries use more renewable resources than ever before. Some people
believes
that it contributes to the protection of the environment and is fewer costs while others Change the verb form
believe
claims
that it could be unpredictable and unsafe as Change the verb form
claim
the
climate change. I think it is beneficial for future development.
One the one hand, some people think that green Remove the article
apply
energy
totally depend
on the weather Change the verb form
depends
such
as wind, rain, sun and cloud to be able to release any energy
. As a result
, it is unreliable and changeable which can even bring some detrimental effects on people’s life
when the climate Replace the word
lives
get
changed. Change the verb form
gets
For example
, solar panels can only be used in the presence of strong and direct sunlight, and it can result in a blackout if there is a cloudy day. In addition
, renewable energy
production facilities also
experience some failures and hence
energy
supply is disrupted.
On the other hand
, some advocates that there are lots of benefits for using these energies which is environmentally-friendly and money-saving. Firstly
, green resources are considered clean energies since it does not cause environmental pollution and it has low carbon and greenhouse emissions. For example
, compared with fossil fuels, solar and wind power are used as natural resources that can reduce air pollution. Secondly
, it has less
expenses as it is using a technology that generates power from the sun, wind, steam, or natural processes which Change the quantifier
fewer
government
does not have to pay to refuel.
In conclusion, Add an article
the government
although
these energies occasionally have some problems, but
these can be solved with the development of technology. I strongly believe that green Remove the conjunction
apply
energy
should be used because it has useful
impact on our environment and is inexpensive.Add an article
a useful
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