Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is true that most countries use more renewable resources than ever before. Some people
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that it contributes to the protection of the environment and is fewer costs while others
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that it could be unpredictable and unsafe as
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climate change. I think it is beneficial for future development. One the one hand, some people think that green
energy
totally
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on the weather
such
as wind, rain, sun and cloud to be able to release any
energy
.
As a result
, it is unreliable and changeable which can even bring some detrimental effects on people’s
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when the climate
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changed.
For example
, solar panels can only be used in the presence of strong and direct sunlight, and it can result in a blackout if there is a cloudy day.
In addition
, renewable
energy
production facilities
also
experience some failures and
hence
energy
supply is disrupted.
On the other hand
, some advocates that there are lots of benefits for using these energies which is environmentally-friendly and money-saving.
Firstly
, green resources are considered clean energies since it does not cause environmental pollution and it has low carbon and greenhouse emissions.
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, compared with fossil fuels, solar and wind power are used as natural resources that can reduce air pollution.
Secondly
, it has
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expenses as it is using a technology that generates power from the sun, wind, steam, or natural processes which
government
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does not have to pay to refuel. In conclusion,
although
these energies occasionally have some problems,
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these can be solved with the development of technology. I strongly believe that green
energy
should be used because it has
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impact on our environment and is inexpensive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainable
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Hydro energy
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Global warming
  • Climate change
  • Technology advancements
  • Economies of scale
  • Intermittent
  • Variable
  • Capital investment
  • Energy infrastructure
  • Energy storage technology
  • Energy supply
  • Energy security
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