A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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There are a number of
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who subscribe to the view that ancient values,
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as honour, kindness, generosity have become meaningless, while the amount of money and properties are vital / essential things. In the
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decades, there is some truth in respect richer
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has increased speedily. Everyone wants to be rich and famous, but it does have its downsides. And the growing number of wealthy humans want respect from
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. There are good points and bad points of being wealthy
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. During our life, we encounter some rich
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who neglect inferior individuals. Neglecting
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is one of the drawbacks of theirs and
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they have a lot of money, but they don't share their wealth with anyone and do not assist their own family members. They only think of themselves. There is no doubt,
people
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do not respect
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type of
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.
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, sometimes we face wealthy folk whо assist
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society with their charitable expenditure and
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good manner. Their behaviour is one of the signs of their worth. In my opinion, some examples of
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individuals are actors who organize benefaction for children in orphanages, nursing homes and low-income families. After that, charitable humans acquire many blessings from
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. Nowadays, the most number of
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are forgetting traditional articles,
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as the best manner, tenderness, that with each other. In my cognition, it all starts with the family. So,
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family members ought to good terms with each
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, be helpful. We should leave good manners for new generations. Good behaviour,
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, kindness tenderness honour,
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a trust
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which is a traditional heritage for young generations. To conclude, it is true that day by day
people
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replace their old-fashioned values for social status. So, sympathy, generosity our features of personality and we do not forget it
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