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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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It is often argued that learning
foreign
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language
 is mainly oriented for travelling overseas while some people opine learning
language
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of
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their native
language
 has other purposes too.
This
 essay will scrutinize both the given views and primarily focus on knowing foreign languages for other reasons rather than moving abroad.
First
 and foremost,learning
new
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 is not a piece of cake for everyone as
myriad
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 of hard effort is required to do it.It means to say that ,an individual will choose to learn
international
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an international
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language
 after having certain purpose like travelling or to work in abroad where lack of knowledge about destinations speaking
language
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 will
definetely
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definitely
leads
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 traveller or worker to numerous problem while communicating.Because of
this
 situation which might come over to anyone,they always
be
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 prepared about
new
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language
 before leaving their home lang.
On the other hand
,most of the people are engaged in various kinds of occupation
wherer
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where
 knowledge of
foreign
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the foreign
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language
 is vital.
Eventhough
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Even though
,they might be working or travelling in their own nation,the environment of their
work place
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workplace
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 might have criteria related to foreign
language
.In the case of tourist guide and porters of touristic country,it is mandatory for them to have knowledge of
other
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another language
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language
besides
 of their native
language
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 to co-operate and communicate in a proper way with their clients who might be from any country. In a nutshell,overseas employees and traveller learn foreign languages by focusing on moving abroad ,
however
,to adopt themselves
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respond
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 the nature of their work,they learn
new
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a new
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language
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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