These days, more people are going to university than in the past. They start work later in life and with higher qualifications. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, there are more citizens enrolled in the university than it was in the past. There is

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a tendency in which people take more time studying before

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their professional career,

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they acquire better qualifications during

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process.

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phenomenon brings positive and negative

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that should be considered, I believe that the positive

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pale in comparison to the drawbacks. The competition in modern society has pushed youngsters to extend their student careers in order to be prepared

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the labour market.

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, many people, nowadays, start their professional career with high qualifications and

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prepared to solve theoretical problems regarding their professions.

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stream might affect positively some economical sectors that require

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skilled workers

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as some research in robotics or cutting edge technology.

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, thirty-five per cent of employees hired for Tesla Motors, the major technological car company in the world, is considered a

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skilled professional.

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, the benefits commented before do not overcome the negative

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movement has been unravelling in individuals’ lives. The longer teenagers have to wait to start their careers, the longer they have to rely on their family support.

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, mental diseases

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as anxiety and depression have been becoming common among

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generation. To illustrate

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, a group of Canadian psychologists have published

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how harmful is for young adults self-esteem not being able to afford their own expenses. To conclude,

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some positive

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could be connected with starting professional careers later in life with more qualifications, I definitely believe that the negative

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overcome the positive ones and might affect

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the self-esteem of numerous young adults who have been waiting to be financially independent.