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An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their better halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?

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Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge amount of debate with regards to
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 technology to research about their half part. Dating Applications have split public opinion, with various means being examined and dissected. From what
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 can see, the negative impact
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 the positive. The
first
 point is that socialized by web sites to get know each other on the internet could be a result of the speed pattern of the modern life, which may be caused by serious security problems
such
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 if they have a criminal record or not.
Secondly
, socialise and dating by web safer is a major concern, and there has been indisputable scientific evidence clearly indicating a link between mental physical health and build a relationship through the internet.
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, the latest study shows that 75% of cyber relationship has to visit a psychologist to feel better from
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. Another serious consequence would be the effect
this
 issue has on their families and social life. The general effects that are created by dating sites are rather dismal and very concerning.
Moreover
, it is extremely damaging
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 families, as it would cause certain problems. As well as
this
, it could
also
 deter certain individuals from developing a relation from
thier
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 bubble and choose in a natural way, the results of
this
 would have a great knock-on effect to future generations.
Last
 but not least, the date sites can harshly impact the community, which in turn would mean a heavy price paid by society. in conclusion, when it comes to
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 theme, different individuals would suggest a wide range of proposals discussing what needs to be done. As far as
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 believe if people socialised in the normal environment, hey would have reliable relation.
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