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Some believe that teenagers experiences most happiness moments in their life while others believe that adults experience more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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What
phaseof
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phase of
life
 brings more
happiness
 in our lives
devides
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divides
 people
in to
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section
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the section
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.Some people believe
its
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 the teenage period whereas others say its the adulthood.
i
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I
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 am of the opinion that teenage phase is the best
time
 one could ever have.
this
 essay will discuss both views and give
opinion
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an opinion
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 as well. It goes without saying that teenage
days
 are the best
days
 of our
life
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lives
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 as are young,
restlessand
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restless and
 carefree.In those
days
 all we need to worry about attending schools and finishing homework on
time
,we do not have to worry about familial responsibilities and other things
such
 as earning money, performing errands and so on.Above all,the best part of that
time
 was we could
hangout
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 with our friends anytime after coming back from schools and colleges.To quote an instance,
i
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I
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 fondly remember
i
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I
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 used to play
lot
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a lot
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 of outdoor games with my friends during summer holidays in the playground
nearby
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 my home.Those were the glory
days
 indeed. On the
othe
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other
hand
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 there is a school of thought that
believe
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 that age is just a number and
happiness
 is something that lies within.As to say,one can experience
immence
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immense
happiness
 in their
adult hood
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adulthood
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 because when we grow up and enter adulthood,we can have full
understandig
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understanding
 of what is going on around us and that brings more emotional
happiness
 that they cherish for their entire
life
.No doubt we are burdened with many responsibilities but being responsible for near and dear ones brings great joy for many people.
For example
,when a father helps his son in taking his
first
 step he feels proud and honoured and we cannot compare his level of
happiness
 with anything else. To conclude,what makes us happy is very subjective.
However
,childhood
days
 outweigh
adult hood
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adulthood
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 period in terms of gathering beautiful memories that we cherish for
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a life
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life
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lifetime
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time
.
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