You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Explain your situation, Say why you feel unsure about living in the city Ask some questions about life in the city.

Dear Karen, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to ask for some information about the
city
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where you are living now. You know that I am looking for a job after completing my graduation. Here, I want to share exciting news with you. Actually, I have got a job in your company as a Sales Manager, which is my dream job. Since living in a big
city
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is new for me,
and
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apply
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I am a little worried about how I will adjust
in
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to
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this
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city
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. New environment, new workplace, and new responsibilities
creates
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create
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a stressful situation for me.
Also
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, finding a good accommodation near the workplace is another problem. I would really appreciate
if
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it if
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you could help me with a few things. Can you tell me how I can access local transportation
?
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,
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or where
should I
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I should
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go for eating out? Is there
any
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a
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shopping mall? How can I find reasonable accommodation in your
city
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? I look forward to hearing from you soon! Warm wishes, Sam.

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structure
Split the letter into clear parts: reason for the move and your job news, how you feel, and the questions you have.
grammar
Fix small grammar mistakes, like 'creates' should be 'create' and use shorter sentences where you can.
vocabulary
Keep the tone friendly and simple by using common words and short lines.
tone
The letter shows a warm tone and asks useful questions about daily life.
content
It explains your main idea well (job news and move) and asks for help.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • job offer
  • move
  • city
  • friend
  • there
  • live
  • situation
  • unsure
  • reasons
  • money
  • cost
  • rent
  • home
  • area
  • near
  • work
  • travel
  • bus
  • train
  • car
  • walk
  • safe
  • safety
  • life
  • people
  • culture
  • weather
  • questions
  • advice
  • tips
  • help
  • arrive
  • stay
  • visit
  • plan
  • arrange
  • look for
  • settle
  • days
  • weekend
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