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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

#children #attention #school
Each one
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 gets a sense of nostalgia as soon as we think about our days at school. I still remember my class teacher who was strict enough to enable me and my classmates to pay
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. In recent times, people argue that kids are not able to dedicate all their energies
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 educating themselves. My essay will speak about
such
 causes and ways to overcome them. Nowadays,
such
 institutions not only have long hours dedicated to teaching academic subjects
,
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 but
also
 ignore developing
students
 in sports. Adding to
this
, parents send their children to private tuitions which increases their frustration.
Further
,
number
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 of
students
 in one class has increased significantly leading tutors unable to provide personalised attention to everyone in their batch. I believe every problem has a solution.
Firstly
, multiple breaks should be introduced in school.
This
 provides some time for
students
 to grasp what they have learnt.
Secondly
, there should be
counselors
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 appointed whose services are easily accessible to all.
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,
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 of
students
 in one classroom should be managed to make teaching more effective.
Hence
, eliminating the need for extra classes. In conclusion, building the right core for the younger generation is of utmost importance.
Therefore
, all necessary steps should be taken to guide them to avoid distractions in
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 phase of their life.
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