Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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world

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most

of

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people

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the people

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use

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public

transport

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to go to work or school and

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is the problem because

this

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group of

people

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need to

use

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the public

transport

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every day so they need to pay for the

publlic

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public

transport

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everyday

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. In many

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countries

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government

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are support

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the citizens to

use

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the

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public

transport

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instead

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of using their own

cars

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to reduce the

polution

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pollution

but the

government

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didn'

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support

about

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the

the

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cost that citizens need to pay.

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, most

of

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people

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the people

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need to

use

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the public

transport

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every day but in some

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countries

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the cost of the public

tranport

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transport

are

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too expensive than they

use

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their own

car

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so they choose to

use

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their own

car

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. The Advantages of using public

transport

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are it will

reduces

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the

polution

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pollution

from the

cars

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and it will

reduces

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traffic jam on the road.

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many

student

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students

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choose to

use

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public

transport

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because it

save

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the

time

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and

use

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less

time

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when they go to school and many workers mostly

use

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the public

transport

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instead

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of using their private

car

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because it

save

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time

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and they don'

t

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need to take cares of the

car

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. The Disadvantages of using public

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are it not safety and

claen

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clean

at all especially during

rush

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time

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,

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, in the morning that everyone

are

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get

in to

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the public

transport

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in some

countries

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their is not even small space to stand and in

now a days

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nowadays

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because of

corona virus

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coronavirus

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the public

tranport

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transport

are

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is

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not really save

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of using their own

cars

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. The cost of

ticket

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a ticket

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to get into public

transport

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in some

countries

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are expensive so some student that don'

t

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have any budget will

can'

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t

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use

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the

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public

transport

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. In my opinion, from the several

paragraph

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that

i

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write about the advantage and

disadvatge

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disadvantage

disadvantages

about the public

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transport

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I think public

transport

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has

a

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advantage more than the

disadvantges

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disadvantages

and from my point of view

i

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think public

transport

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shold

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should

be

funed

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funded

by

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government

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the government

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because some of

citizens

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the citizens

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in their

countries

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don'

t

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have the budget to

use

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the public

transport

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at all and if

government

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support in

this

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part

i

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think

their

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there

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will be more

people

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to

use

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the public

transport

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instead

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of using their private

cars

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.