Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In several nations around the
world
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most
of
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people
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the people
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use
public
transport
to go to work or school and
this
is the problem because
this
group of
people
need to
use
the public
transport
every day so they need to pay for the
publlic
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public
transport
everyday
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. In many
countries
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government
are support
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the citizens to
use
the
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public
transport
instead
of using their own
cars
to reduce the
polution
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pollution
but the
government
didn'
t
support
about
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the
the
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cost that citizens need to pay.
Finally
, most
of
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people
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the people
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need to
use
the public
transport
every day but in some
countries
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the cost of the public
tranport
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transport
are
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too expensive than they
use
their own
car
so they choose to
use
their own
car
. The Advantages of using public
transport
are it will
reduces
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the
polution
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pollution
from the
cars
and it will
reduces
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reduce
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traffic jam on the road.
Now a days
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many
student
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students
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choose to
use
public
transport
because it
save
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the
time
and
use
less
time
when they go to school and many workers mostly
use
the public
transport
instead
of using their private
car
because it
save
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time
and they don'
t
need to take cares of the
car
. The Disadvantages of using public
transport
are it not safety and
claen
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clean
at all especially during
rush
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the rush
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time
,
for instance
, in the morning that everyone
are
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is
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get
in to
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the public
transport
in some
countries
their is not even small space to stand and in
now a days
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nowadays
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because of
corona virus
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coronavirus
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the public
tranport
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transport
are
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not really save
instead
of using their own
cars
. The cost of
ticket
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a ticket
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to get into public
transport
in some
countries
are expensive so some student that don'
t
have any budget will
can'
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t
use
the
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apply
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public
transport
. In my opinion, from the several
paragraph
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that
i
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write about the advantage and
disadvatge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
about the public
transport
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,transport
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I think public
transport
has
a
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advantage more than the
disadvantges
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disadvantages
and from my point of view
i
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I
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think public
transport
shold
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should
be
funed
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funded
by
government
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the government
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because some of
citizens
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the citizens
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in their
countries
don'
t
have the budget to
use
the public
transport
at all and if
government
support in
this
part
i
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I
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think
their
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there
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will be more
people
to
use
the public
transport
instead
of using their private
cars
.
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