Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people, therefore, think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevent subjects should not receive the government funding Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantage

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Education is the best way to develop our society ,
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some universities give scholarships to those
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who enrolled in a particular course which is beneficial for the community.
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, which subjects are common and had
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already enough graduates in the country or already developed that courses not free for individuals. In my opinion, it is very essential to funding in the education sector. Definitely , it will be beneficial for the world in coming years. Especially, some research programs need an unpaid
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because it takes longer and if government give scholarship to
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than student encourage himself to do better in that
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and they don't feel the stress of income or paying money for courses that would be helping them to concentrate more
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a particular
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. On the
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side, the subjects which are not essential according to the modern era , that should be paid
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individuals because it helps to motivate
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to get the unpaid
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of
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rather one paid degree or diploma.
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,
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should be helpful for the government sector to invest money in a particular
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of
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so they will get a good result for the country.
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, if any organization will findings some space programs research than they give get good results from
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to explore other planets and they will get plenty of ideas or techniques to get success in astronomical physics. In the nutshell, the government should invest
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budget for the essential
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of
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which helps to grow the community and inspire youth to choose particular subjects.
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