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Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #courses #anyone #teacher #course
Now a days
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, everyone assumes that if an individual
attend
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 certain courses
then
 can become a tutor but, in my perspective, to be a good lecturer a person should have qualities like patience, vast knowledge about various matters etc. In my
essay
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 I will discuss both views and will try to prove my point by examples. If a person
enrolls
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 in a course which can
taught
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teach
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 him some techniques about the teaching methods, but we cannot predict that by completing that course that individual is ready to deliver his knowledge to pupils in an effective manner.
For instance
, to teach children, an instructor must have some experience about the teaching methods if the educator is teaching his
students
 in a dull way
then
students
 cannot learn anything and will find that the teacher is boring, and
students
 can be easily distracted. There is a great possibility that some
students
 can get asleep in class.
In
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 the contrary, assume that a person has some experience, patience and
know how
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 to handle the
students
 but does not know about the modern ways of teaching
then
 he cannot be employed by a university as a professor. We live in a modern era, now we have various gadgets which can help a lecturer to create interesting videos,
power point
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 slides to present. We all know that if by watching humans learn fast and
students
also
finds
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this
 way of studying remarkably interesting and they learn fast. In conclusion, an idol instructor
must have
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 skills
about
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 creating interesting content because only
this
 way youngsters can adapt stuff quickly. To gain these skills, an individual must attend courses which can
taught
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teach
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 these
him
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 skills.
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