Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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, everyone assumes that if an individual

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certain courses

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can become a tutor but, in my perspective, to be a good lecturer a person should have qualities like patience, vast knowledge about various matters etc. In my

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I will discuss both views and will try to prove my point by examples. If a person

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in a course which can

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him some techniques about the teaching methods, but we cannot predict that by completing that course that individual is ready to deliver his knowledge to pupils in an effective manner.

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, to teach children, an instructor must have some experience about the teaching methods if the educator is teaching his

students

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in a dull way

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students

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cannot learn anything and will find that the teacher is boring, and

students

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can be easily distracted. There is a great possibility that some

students

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can get asleep in class.

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the contrary, assume that a person has some experience, patience and

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to handle the

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but does not know about the modern ways of teaching

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he cannot be employed by a university as a professor. We live in a modern era, now we have various gadgets which can help a lecturer to create interesting videos,

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slides to present. We all know that if by watching humans learn fast and

students

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finds

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way of studying remarkably interesting and they learn fast. In conclusion, an idol instructor

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skills

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creating interesting content because only

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way youngsters can adapt stuff quickly. To gain these skills, an individual must attend courses which can

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skills.

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

278 words

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