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The continued rise in the world's population is the great problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the cause of this continue rise?Do you agree that is the great problem faced by humanity

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Since
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 revolution,
rampant
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the rampant
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 increase in world
population
 is one of the pressing issues across the world.While many
people
 consider
this
 predicament as the great
problem
 that
human
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 race is facing
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,in my opinion,climate change is the issue that requires immediate action
instead
 of
population
 control.
First
 and
formost
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foremost
for most
,advancements in technology
is
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 one of the major reason that attributes the increase in
population
 because owing to that craft
produstion
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production
 turned into machine manufacturing;which in turn,made steady food supplies available to the masses that coincide with advanced medical
facilitis
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facilities
.Owing to that life
expectncy
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expectancy
 of
people
 increased substantially.Apart from that,in many countries,gender discrimination is the other cause for
this
problem
 as in those countries,many
people
 believe that having
amale
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a male
male
child
 is better than having a female
child
;
Thus
 in the aspiration of having
second
 male
offspring
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 they give birth to another
child
.
Hence
,that causes unwanted
groeth
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growth
 in
population
. Considering the ill-effects of increasing overpopulation,many
contries
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countries
 have taken precotunary steps in that direction by imposing
one
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child
 policy and providing basic education
ti
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to
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their
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 citizens.
Such
 steps have worked wonders in
population
 overgrowth and thereby,it hasn't remained a
problem
 anymore.Having said that, climate change has become the most daunting
problem
 of 21st century because only
bacause
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because
 of that we are facing
life threatening
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 effects of global warming in which sea levels are increasing;which has displaced many
people
 from the
costal
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coastal
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 areas.
Moreover
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deplition
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depletion
 of
ozone
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the ozone
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 layer is the prime reason
of
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 skin cancer these days. To conclude,looking at the current scenario,dealing with the environmental changes has become
need
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the need
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 of an hour rather than
population
 growth as it is an issue that has already been taken care of
many
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 nations worldwide.
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