Comment on the arguments presented by the Defense and Prosecution in The Prosecutor v. Dominic Ongwen, case nº ICC-02/04-01/15, with regards to the criminal responsibility of former child soldiers.

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The
Prosecutor
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v.
Dominic
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Ongwen
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is the
first
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case
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in the International Criminal
Court
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(
ICC
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) which involves the criminal
responsibility
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of a former
child
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soldier
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. The involvement of
children
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in armed conflicts can make them victims at
first
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and
then
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perpetrators in the future.
Dominic
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Ongwen
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is accused of having committed
crimes
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established by the
Rome
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Statute
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, while he took part in the Lord's Resistance Army (
LRA
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), a rebel
group
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, in northern Uganda.
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paramilitary
group
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abducted the
defendant
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when he was a
child
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in
order
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to make him a
soldier
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in the conflict. On his journey with the rebel
group
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, he became a loyal, efficient and fearless
soldier
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, until he reached the commander level.
People
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who came across
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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tell different versions of his
situation
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as a
victim
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and perpetrator. Some remember that
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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took risks by setting
people
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free from kidnapping.
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, others say they have seen him killing pregnant women and boiling
people
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in pots. Like other
members
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of the
LRA
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,
Mr
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.
Dominic
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Ongwen
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had contradictory behaviors that reveal the complexity of his character, but he was obedient and skilled enough to be promoted to a
position
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of leadership in the
group
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. The
ICC
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investigated the
crimes
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in which
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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participated between 2002 and 2005 in refugee camps organized by the government, in the northern region of Uganda.
Thus
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, in June 2005, when
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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was about twenty-nine
years
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old, his
first
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warrant of arrest was issued by the
ICC
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, and the same happened to other
LRA
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participants, including
Joseph
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Kony
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, the
group
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’s
leader
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.
Dominic
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Ongwen
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is charged with seventy
crimes
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listed in the
Rome
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Statute
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, counted between
crimes
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against humanity and
war
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crimes
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. Regarding
crimes
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against humanity, the alleged ones are:
murder
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and attempted
murder
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, torture, sexual
slavery
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, rape, enslavement, forced marriage as an inhumane act, persecution and other inhumane
acts
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. As to
war
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crimes
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: attack against the civilian population,
murder
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and attempted
murder
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, rape, sexual
slavery
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, forced marriage, torture, cruel treatment, outrages upon personal dignity, destruction of property, pillaging,
in
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addition
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to recruitment and use of
children
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under the
age
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of fifteen to actively participate in hostilities. On March 23, 2016, the accusations were confirmed by the Pre-Trial Chamber II and
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Ongwen’s
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case
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began to be judged by the
ICC
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Trial Chamber IX and it is still in progress. It is
also
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important to mention that there are representatives of the 4,115 victims in the
case
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. They were allowed by the
ICC
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chamber to participate in the trial giving their testimonies against the
defendant
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. These
people
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are residents of northern Uganda and have suffered different types of
crimes
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committed by
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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. At the time of the
crimes
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, an estimated amount of 35,000
people
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were affected by the attacks. At present, the international community is before a peculiar
case
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of a
child
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who was a
victim
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and became the author of serious
crimes
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. In
this
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writing sample, the
Defense
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’s
arguments
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will be
firstly
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analyzed and
then
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, the
Prosecution
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’s.
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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Defense
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argues that his criminal
responsibility
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and liability should be excluded under the
article
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31(a)(c)(d) of the
Rome
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Statue as he was under duress .
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, it is said that he suffers from a mental disease that destroys his capacity of appreciating the illegality or nature of his
actions
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, especially at the time of the
crime
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.
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addition
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, the
Defense
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claims that
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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does not understand the charges (based on the opinion of the
Defense
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’s mental health experts) and all his
actions
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should be attributed to
LRA
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leader
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Joseph
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Kony
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.
Dominic
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Ongwen
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's
Defense
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declares that the accused was abducted by the
LRA
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in 1987, when he was about nine
years
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old, on his way to school. His mother was allegedly murdered by the
LRA
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and his father disappeared. In the
LRA
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,
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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was reportedly indoctrinated, tortured, threatened and beaten by the rebels.
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, he would have been forced to practice
acts
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of
violence
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, as well as to witness scenes of hostilities. According to the
defendant
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's lawyers,
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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was led to believe that
Joseph
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Kony
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, the
leader
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of the
LRA
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, had complete
control
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of the
group
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and required discipline from the
combatants
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.
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addition
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,
Mr
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.
Kony
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is believed to have supernatural and spiritual powers among
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members
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.
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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would have suffered coercion since his abduction and feared to be murdered, especially if he tried to escape.
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, it is alleged that his participation in the
group
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and his
position
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of leadership would be justified by his ability to survive, which would be better than others’ under duress.
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, it is said by the
Defense
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that the
defendant
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's criminal
responsibility
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should be excluded because his
actions
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were a consequence of the coercion he suffered under threat of death or serious injury, under the
article
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31(1)(d) of the
Rome
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Statute
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. The
defendant
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, his family and community were allegedly threatened too. According to the
Defense
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, he would have acted in a necessary and reasonable manner under the
situation
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, satisfying the grounds to exclude the criminal
responsibility
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.
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, it is said by
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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's lawyers that
Mr
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.
Kony
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’s
acts
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and other
circumstances
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were beyond his
control
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. The
defendant
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is said not to have
intention
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to cause harm to
people
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, but only to survive
slavery
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. The
article
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30(1) of the
Rome
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Statute
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establishes the mental
element
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of
crimes
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related to the criminal
responsibility
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and liability: “Unless
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provided, a person shall be criminally responsible and liable for punishment for a
crime
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within the jurisdiction of the
Court
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only if the material elements are committed with intent and knowledge.”.
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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Defense
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argues that the mental
element
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of the
crime
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would not be present in the
case
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since the accused would have no
intention
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to commit the imputed
crimes
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. He was allegedly coerced to do so. The
Defense
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claims that indirect co-perpetration should not be regarded as a mode of liability because there is no
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legal provision in the
Rome
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Statute
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.
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concept would come from customary international law.
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,
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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's
Defense
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claims that the
Prosecution
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did not demonstrate the
defendant
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's planning and effective participation in the alleged
crimes
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. There would be neither significant contribution from his
actions
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nor any possibility of avoiding the atrocities. His behavior would have been based on reasonableness and necessity under duress. As to the
crime
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of forced marriage, it would be subsumed by the
crime
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of sexual
slavery
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and it could not be considered cumulatively with
crimes
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of
violence
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based on gender, as there would be no
intention
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to commit them.
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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's
Defense
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argues that he could not deny women offered to him as wives because
Mr
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.
Kony
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's idea was to increase the army with the reproduction of new
members
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,
in
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addition
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to recruitment. The
Defense
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alleges that the
age
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of 18
years
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old, which serves as a marker for adulthood and criminal
responsibility
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before the
ICC
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, has little relevance for a former
child
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soldier
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. The
defendant
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did not have a normal childhood for he was raised without education. His performance as a
soldier
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would be indescribable since his life was much more experiential and not intellectual. Concerning the
Prosecution
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’s
arguments
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, it is understood that the
LRA
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was a structured, organized and hierarchical
group
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with discipline, ranks and promotions.
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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would be in a
position
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of authority and he would have
control
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over the troops.
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he would be aware of the
circumstances
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, acting as a senior commander, and becoming the biggest one in 2005, an essential participant in the
LRA
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's
actions
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.
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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's compulsory wives, as well as former commanders, former
combatants
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and abductees of the
LRA
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witnessed
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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participation in the armed conflict as a
leader
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. As
prosecutor
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Fatou Bensouda pointed out at the opening statement at
Court
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, the
LRA
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was a structured and hierarchical organization.
Joseph
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Kony
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, the general commander, was at the top of the organization called "
Control
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Altar". Below
this
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were four brigades: Sinia, Gilva, Trinkle and Stockree. Bensouda highlighted that “orders flowed down the chain of command. Reports on operations were transmitted back up the chain of command”.
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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commanded the Sinia brigade by March 2004. There are reports of former
combatants
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who accuse
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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of murdering and beating
people
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for futile reasons, as well as coldly raping his compulsory wives. According to witnesses,
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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subordinate
combatants
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followed his orders to immediately kill
people
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who tried to escape, without prior consultation or direct
order
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, but with a later report.
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addition
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, the
Prosecution
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accuses
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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of having
control
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over the distribution of women and girls to the
LRA
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fighters. The
Prosecution
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admits that
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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was the
victim
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of the same
crime
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he became a perpetrator: the
crime
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of using and recruiting
children
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under the
age
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of fifteen
years
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to participate actively in hostilities, under the
article
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8(2)(e)(vii) of the
Rome
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Statute
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.
However
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, the
Prosecution
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points out that
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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would be fourteen
years
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old at the time of the abduction, not over nine
years
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old as presented by the
Defense
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. It is said that the fact that
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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was a
victim
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in the past would be neither a justification nor an excuse for committing
crimes
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. The moral
responsibility
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is necessary. The criminal process in the
ICC
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does not focus on the goodness nor on badness of
people
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, but on the criminal
acts
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practiced by them. The
Prosecution
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obtained by interception recordings from the
LRA
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's radio conversations by Ugandan military and security organizations.
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evidences
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are very significant and the records would confirm the
Prosecution
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's allegations, especially concerning
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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confessions of
crimes
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. For these and other
evidences
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, the
Prosecution
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understood that he had the knowledge and the
intention
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to commit the alleged
crimes
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, a fact that would satisfy the mental
element
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of the
crime
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, under the
article
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30(1) of the
Rome
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Statute
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.
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, the material
element
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(the action itself) established by the same
article
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above would be satisfied because the
Prosecution
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provides
evidences
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of
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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essential contributions to the
crimes
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and the coordinated manner he acted with other perpetrators.
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, the
Prosecution
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concludes that the
defendant
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is criminally responsible and liable for punishment for the alleged
crimes
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. According to the
Prosecution
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,
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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would have failed to act in a necessary and reasonable way within his powers in
order
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to prevent
crimes
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committed by his subordinates, or he would have failed to submit the matter to the competent authorities for investigation and
prosecution
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. For many times he was allegedly away for days or weeks from any
LRA
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authority and he could have escaped or released
people
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under his command.
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addition
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, between July 2002 and December 2005, the Amnesty Commission records show that around 9,000
LRA
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members
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surrendered and received amnesty, but
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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would not have choosen to do so. He would have continued his criminal activities with the rebels, as emphasized by the
Prosecutor
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, executing operations, which caused misery and death to many civilians, and afterwards, reporting them on the radio with enthusiasm and no regret. With regard to individual criminal
responsibility
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,
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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is charged pursuant to the articles 25(3)(a) (direct perpetration, indirect perpetration and indirect co-perpetration), 25(3) (b) (ordering), 25(3) (d) (i) and (ii) and 28(a) (command
responsibility
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) of the
Rome
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Statute
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, for
crimes
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against humanity and
war
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crimes
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, which have already been mentioned in
this
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writing sample. Presented both parties’ allegations, it is necessary to analyze the criminal
responsibility
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of former
child
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soldiers before the
ICC
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.
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analysis must be critical, on a
case
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-by-
case
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basis in
order
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to achieve justice. In armed conflicts, many
children
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are coerced for
years
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in paramilitary groups, even after becoming adult
combatants
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. Each one has a particular experience, which varies according to
age
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, personality, education, maturity, the place of
war
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, beliefs, religion, level of poverty and
violence
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, their length of service in the
group
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, etc. Each person’s unique experience as a
child
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soldier
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must be taken into consideration by the
Court
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. In a hypothetical
situation
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in the
ICC
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,
for example
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, a former
child
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soldier
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is accused of
crimes
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committed at the
age
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of 19.
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,
this
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defendant
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was hypothetically abducted by an extreme violent
group
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of rebels when he was only 6
years
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old and his parents were killed by
this
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group
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. During his 13
years
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of service, he was abused, exposed to
violence
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, coercion, training and indoctrination. The attempt to escape from
this
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group
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would result in immediate death and disobedience would result in serious bodily injury. Still, hypothetically,
evidences
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demonstrate that accused acted as a mere
soldier
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, obeyed commands and executing them necessarily, proportionally and reasonably.
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, the
defendant
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’s criminal
responsibility
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would be more likely to be excluded since
this
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hypothetical
case
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describes a more favorable
situation
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to the accused if compared to
Mr
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.
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Ongwen’s
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. As to
Dominic
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Ongwen
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case
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, analyzing both parties’
arguments
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and the non-confidential
evidences
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presented in
Court
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, it is reasonable to say that the
Prosecution
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’s
arguments
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and
evidences
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are stronger and solider rather than the
Defense
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’s. The
circumstances
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are not favorable to
Dominic
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Ongwen
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for many reasons. The
defendant
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grew up in the
LRA
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and was not an ordinary
soldier
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throughout his journey. He achieved a
position
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of leadership, and he was able to act along with other perpetrators in a coordinated manner in a common plan. He had power to
control
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the
group
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, and to give orders.
Mr
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.
Ongwen
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was engaged to be successful while committing atrocities. The interception recordings from the
LRA
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's radio conversations demonstrate his enthusiasm and his commands to subordinate
combatants
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to proceed with
crimes
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. These
evidences
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show the mental
element
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of the
crime
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: the
intention
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to commit them with knowledge of the
circumstances
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and the consequences. As the
prosecutor
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Fatou Bensouda points out,
Dominic
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Ongwen
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will be judged for what he did as an adult, not for what he did as a
child
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soldier
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.
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, his bad experiences in the past, as she says: “may perhaps amount to some mitigation of sentence in the event that he is convicted of these
crimes
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”.
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would be a reasonable conclusion about the
case
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to bring reparation and justice to the victims, as well as to satisfy their expectations.
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