In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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transportation
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better to use the huge volume of funds on building rail line stations between cities. Linking Words
However
, some think that the maintenance of current public transit is important. These are two contrasting viewpoints and Linking Words
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essay will discuss both viewpoints while final opinion will be drawn.
To start with, supporters of the view that more railway stations should be constructed thought that Linking Words
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will aid in reducing emissions of pollutants to the air. Linking Words
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implies that there will be an improvement in the health quality of the citizens. Linking Words
For instance
, Researchers in health care service claimed a significant reduction in patients diagnosed with asthma after the introduction of rail line system in the Linking Words
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as farm products from one city to another will be convenient. Linking Words
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easily. In fact, Use synonyms
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can boost the economic status of the Linking Words
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with these market strategies. Use synonyms
For example
, Dangote Enterprise in Nigeria uses railway stations in transferring cement products. Linking Words
Hence
, it is clearly seen that a huge amount of fund should be diverted for the building of train lines.
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transportation
structure should be ameliorated by budgeting with a huge amount of capital because it will help to reduce congestion on highways. Use synonyms
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transportation
on road will be easier and conducive due to less traffic jam. To cite an example, Recent construction of overhead Bridges on highways in Nigeria control traffic problem and make travelling convenient. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, if more expenses are allocated for already public transports Linking Words
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as the widening of roads, distribution of new buses to drivers will assist in decreasing the occurrence of road accidents. Linking Words
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means that the safety of the citizens will be secured. Linking Words
Consequently
, budgeting a huge amount of money to available transit in the Linking Words
country
will be beneficial to the citizens at large.
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essay discussed two contrasting points about the importance of diverting fund to the building the railways or maintaining the current transports system. In my opinion, I believe that connecting cities by building a new railway station will be preferable because the environment will be safe from air pollution and Linking Words
transportation
of good will be easier.Use synonyms
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