Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Education
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is
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a possession which never lets the possessor down. It does
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in some way or the other. It is due to
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reason that it is kept at a very high pedestal and only contributes to the widening of the horizon of the possessor. Due to
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firm fact, it can be said that
education
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earned by studying any kind of
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is never ever a waste of time. It only adds up to the total personality of an individual and makes him a matured, understanding and a complete human being.
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, there are other schools of thoughts who are of the view that the pupils must not be taught the
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in which they have no interest
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. According to their belief,
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only contributes
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the wastage of time. They believe in the theory that the students must be made to study the
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which are liked by the students. Unfortunately, the followers of the
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school of thought invariably tend to forget the fact that the thought process of a
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is too narrow, too limited due to the immaturity level where the
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tends to stand at
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a tender age. The
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of a
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is just like
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which can be moulded in either way. In
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a scenario, if the child is given the freedom to study the
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according to their liking, the changes of a tender
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to get lost in the world of fantasy would lead the nation towards a horrific and unpleasant future. The
mind
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of a
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is as holy as Bible, as sacred as
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and if
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a
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is guided in the right direction, by making him understand the potential of
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possessed (by studying even the
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which they do not like), the future of not only the
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but the nation
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shines. It is only
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which encourages mankind to labour in
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in order to enjoy the fruits in future. In a recent interview a prospective candidate, who had applied for the immigration to a country, did share his experience
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the
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which he had no interest in studying did contribute and acted as a saviour for him to gather the ‘points’ for the educational qualifications. The article in the fortnightly published magazine, The Immigrants,
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discussed his getting successful in achieving his goal due to the accrual of those ‘points’ which he got due to
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education
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. In the end, I opine in favour of studying any kind of
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because it is the
education
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which is dearer than the fine opals, more precious than Emeralds and places a person above all.
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