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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Several
people
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 subscribe to the view that ancient values,
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, kindness, generosity have become meaningless, while the amount of money and properties are vital things. I feel that I must take issue with
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 point of view and I will analyze the issues below. In the
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 decades, there is some truth in respect richer
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 has increased speedily. Everyone wants to be rich and famous, but it does have its downsides and the growing number of wealthy humans want either likes or respect from
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. There are good points and bad points of being wealthy. During our life, we encounter some rich
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 who neglect inferior individuals which is one of the drawbacks of theirs. They have a lot of money, but they don't share their wealth with authority and do not even assist inferior capability members of their family. They only think of themselves. There is no doubt,
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 do not respect
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 type of
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.
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, sometimes we face wealthy
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 whо assist the society with their charitable expenditure and
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 good manner. Their
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 is one of the signs of their worth.
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 as actors organize benefaction for children in orphanages, nursing homes, and low-income families in different celebrities. After that, charitable humans acquire many blessings from
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. Nowadays, the most number of
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 are forgetting traditional articles,
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 manner, tenderness, that with each other. In my cognition, it all starts with the family. So,
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 family members ought to good terms with each other, be helpful. We should leave good manners for new generations.
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, kindness, tenderness,
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, trust which is a traditional heritage for young generations. To conclude, it is true that day by day
people
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 replace their old-fashioned values for social status but sympathy and generosity are our features of personality and we should not forget them.
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