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In the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation out-weigh the disadvantages?

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The proportion of elderly people in some countries
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 is considerably higher while in other regions young people comprise the highest percentage of the total population. Having a larger youth population is considered to have more advantages for a nation, and I think that a
country
 should have more adolescents for
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faster
development
.
To begin
 with, the current generation is dynamic, energetic and can contribute to the job sector which has a huge positive impact on the economic
development
 of a province. They come with fresh ideas and are free from old superstitions and traditional beliefs. It gives them a competitive advantage. Educated teenagers are
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 best resource a
country
 can have, and their contribution to the
country
 is significantly higher than the participation of aged people.
Also
, the younger generation can grasp new technology faster which is the need of the hour for a
country
’s
development
. They bring in fresh talent and ideas which lead to economic growth.
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 sector is full of fresh minds leading to global
development
. On the flip side, it could not be denied that the older generation
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 already contributed to reforming the
country
. They have vast wisdom and experience that could help in vital decision making. They are often considered a better fit for decision-making positions. To conclude, senior citizens should not be considered a burden to the society,
however
, young blood
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 more to contribute to the nation as a whole and
that is
 why it is beneficial for a kingdom to have an active workforce.
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