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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. what are the advantages and disadvantages

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Among
university
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students
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 is become ever more popular to spend part of the studies in another country, hosted by other institutions.
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 it can be one of the best
experience
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 a student can ever
had
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, it is not always certain that going
to
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abroad is more enriching than staying at the
home
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university
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.
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 essay will argue both advantages and disadvantages
about
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 having an exchange
experience
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on
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university
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students
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. European study projects,
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 as the Erasmus, are meant to let young
students
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 from universities
to
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spent part of their
studiesin
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studies in
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 hosting institution, for a period between 5 to 12 months.
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 habit is becoming more popular with years and, as main feedback received, is an enriching
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 where
students
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 have the chance
for
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 both meeting people from different cultural and social extractions
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 and
experience
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new
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 type of educations. Once came back
at
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 the
home
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 institution, the
students
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 seem to have stronger determination in studying and, at the same time, richer in personal knowledge.
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, spending some time abroad
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 may turn into a not positive
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. Unfortunately, It can
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 that the hosting institution does not provide courses as good as the
home
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university
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 and
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 people return from the
experience
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 with less
knownledge
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knowledge
 than when they left.
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, if not supported by
schoolarships
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scholarships
scholarship
, the
experience
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 of going abroad can be quite expensive and more costly compared to studying at the
home
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university
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. In conclusion, funding projects
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 as Erasmus
,
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 can be wonderful and enriching experiences that encourage
students
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 in their studies. Whilst acknowledging that there are drawbacks
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 as less valuable lessons or very expensive experiences
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 if they are not funded.
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