Sample 3.Animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons and solutions.
The activities of humans as apex creatures severely affect
animals
. Furthermore
, forestation and hunting are some of the reasons that lead to the extinction of animals
. This
essay will discuss the aforementioned causes and the solutions, such
as encouraging tree planting and also
a ban on animal hunting by the government.
Forestation has a great impact on the habitat of animals
, especially birds. For example, in Nigeria due to the cutting down of trees, fewer birds are seen, as many of them migrate to neigbouring
countries where they can find suitable abode. Correct your spelling
neighbouring
In addition
, hunting is also
a causative factor to
the decline of animal life in certain geographic areas. Research reports that Verify preposition usage
in
animals
such
as elephants and whales in china are killed either for leisure,
or for their parts which are sold at Remove the comma
apply
exhorbitant
rates on the black market. Correct your spelling
exorbitant
Consequently
, such
actions lead to the massive reduction in number
of these Change the article
a number
the number
animals
.
One way to mitigate the effect of man's activities on the immediate environment is through planting. Programs such
as " Save a tree, Save earth
" which was carried out in Ghana some years back, where citizens were encouraged to plant trees in a bid to protect the decline of Add an article
the earth
bird
population. Add an article
the bird
This
will help to increase settlements for them. Furthermore
, strict laws and measures should be enacted to disuade
the killing of Correct your spelling
dissuade
animals
either for sport or entertainment. Moreover
, Japan is already experiencing a surge in number
of whales present in the Yuan sea, which was not so in the years past. The actions of the government by Change the article
a number
the number
prohbiting
animal abuse and punishing erring people led to Correct your spelling
prohibiting
this
.
To sum up, animals
contribute to the ecosystem. Hence
, they are relevant, if actions such
as destruction of trees and hunting are countered by the government and indivduals
effectively there will be visible growth in Correct your spelling
individuals
animal
population, in a not so distant time.Add an article
the animal
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