Sample 3.Animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons and solutions.

The activities of humans as apex creatures severely affect
animals
.
Furthermore
, forestation and hunting are some of the reasons that lead to the extinction of
animals
.
This
essay will discuss the aforementioned causes and the solutions,
such
as encouraging tree planting and
also
a ban on animal hunting by the government. Forestation has a great impact on the habitat of
animals
, especially birds. For example, in Nigeria due to the cutting down of trees, fewer birds are seen, as many of them migrate to
neigbouring
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neighbouring
countries where they can find suitable abode.
In addition
, hunting is
also
a causative factor
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the decline of animal life in certain geographic areas. Research reports that
animals
such
as elephants and whales in china are killed either for leisure
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or for their parts which are sold at
exhorbitant
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exorbitant
rates on the black market.
Consequently
,
such
actions lead to the massive reduction in
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of these
animals
. One way to mitigate the effect of man's activities on the immediate environment is through planting. Programs
such
as " Save a tree, Save
earth
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" which was carried out in Ghana some years back, where citizens were encouraged to plant trees in a bid to protect the decline of
bird
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population.
This
will help to increase settlements for them.
Furthermore
, strict laws and measures should be enacted to
disuade
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dissuade
the killing of
animals
either for sport or entertainment.
Moreover
, Japan is already experiencing a surge in
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of whales present in the Yuan sea, which was not so in the years past. The actions of the government by
prohbiting
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prohibiting
animal abuse and punishing erring people led to
this
. To sum up,
animals
contribute to the ecosystem.
Hence
, they are relevant, if actions
such
as destruction of trees and hunting are countered by the government and
indivduals
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individuals
effectively there will be visible growth in
animal
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population, in a not so distant time.
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