Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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their opinions about the negative effect of
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change
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that causes
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bad time in
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. Meanwhile, others think
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environment
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could lead
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creative opportunities in the
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.  According to
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statement, I believe that
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change
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is the importance
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induced by human especially in the industrials which involving in
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.
Climate
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change
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can make the
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need to restrict their rules in their industrial factors to adapt
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globalize environment
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.
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, it the sign of an improvement through the
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models to live as a sustainable
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and harmless to the resources of the planet as much as they can. It is a tendency to believe that
climate
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issues
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are the big factors that cause a negative effect on
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.
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, many industrial factories
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as
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drinking companies are now facing
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the problem of massive draughts and rare
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fresh
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water
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to manufactured.
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reason is from the
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issues
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which including greenhouses effect and
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the increasing of ocean levels and destroyed balance of fresh
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in
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location
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around the world. The
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company has
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production less than the consumption requires.
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is why
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change
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issues
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are affect
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on
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the
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. From another point of view, There
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the greatest opportunities for
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to create their ways of
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company. For
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, the big department stores
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as Pink N Pay or Wall Marts are now reducing the plastic bag and encourage the customers to concerns more about
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issues
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. These company will
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the money for whom that need the plastic bag when they come to the shopping
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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