some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment.

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houses

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the only place that

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suitable for family,as the world develops the

apartments

become eminent because they are affordable and more secure.Meanwhile,there some

people

prefer to live in a

house

so they can have

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their own

space

.

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with,most

of

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houses

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are much more expensive compared to

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people

who are in shortage of money are

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to afford it.

However

,

people

who stay in a

house

can have their own garden to do some planting tasks.

Moreover

,living in a

house

probably have more

space

than an

apartment

so it is quite comfortable to have your own

space

.

Therefore

,

instead

of buying the same type of condos buyers can have any designs that fit their taste.

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living in a big

space

sounds interesting,but it needs more than 3

people

to live with because living alone in a

house

is not a thing that everyone could stand it.

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,the

cleanning

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duties would be tougher because of plenty

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so the family has to do chores regularly. For the

apartments

,the

first

benefit you will gain is the cost of living.To illustrate,a

house

in Vietnam can up to minimum

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billions

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VND while an

apartment

in an enormous city just costs at minimum

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billions

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VND so a

house

's price is three times

compare

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to an

apartment

.

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,living in an

apartment

may

does

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not have

sparing

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of spaces but they are highly secure because there's always some shifting of

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to operate all the time for the

apartment

.One the

factor

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that captures the customers to buy a condo nowadays are inner design and decoration,a

high class

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apartment

would

have

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spend a lot of money for designers in order to impress buyers with a gorgeous and

organizely

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organized

space

.

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living in

such

a modern building

however

unfortunates can be happened

such

as elevator

stucking

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stocking

or fire accidents.In order to

maitain

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maintain

the

pretigous

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prestigious

previous

for

apartments

, the header of

apartment

companies are

endevouring

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endeavouring

to find solutions to gain

customers's

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trust like regularly maintaining the

apartment

's elevator is one of the good examples. To conclude,in my opinion in future the advantages will

outweight

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the disadvantages of living in an

apartment

compare

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to the standard of living in a

house

and

people

can

foreseen

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that

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cost

are

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slowly rising so the price of houses probably increases