some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment.
For the past
decades
houses Add a comma
,decades
is
the only place that Change the verb form
are
are
suitable for family,as the world develops the Change the verb form
is
apartments
become eminent because they are affordable and more secure.Meanwhile,there some people
prefer to live in a house
so they can have Add a pronoun
their own
own
their own Change the verb form
owned
space
.
To begin
with,most of
Change preposition
apply
houses
are much more expensive compared to Add an article
the houses
apartments
Add the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
people
who are in shortage of money are hardly
to afford it.Replace the word
hard
However
,people
who stay in a house
can have their own garden to do some planting tasks.Moreover
,living in a house
probably have more space
than an apartment
so it is quite comfortable to have your own space
.Therefore
,instead
of buying the same type of condos buyers can have any designs that fit their taste.Eventhough
living in a big Correct your spelling
Even though
space
sounds interesting,but it needs more than 3 people
to live with because living alone in a house
is not a thing that everyone could stand it.Also
,the cleanning
duties would be tougher because of plenty Correct your spelling
cleaning
spaces
so the family has to do chores regularly.
For the Change preposition
of spaces
apartments
,the first
benefit you will gain is the cost of living.To illustrate,a house
in Vietnam can up to minimum 9
Change preposition
of 9
billions
VND while an Change to singular
billion
apartment
in an enormous city just costs at minimum 3
Change preposition
of 3
billions
VND so a Change to singular
billion
house
's price is three times compare
to an Change the form of the verb
compared
apartment
.In addition
,living in an apartment
may does
not have Change the verb form
do
sparing
of spaces but they are highly secure because there's always some shifting of Change the verb form
to spare
safe guards
to operate all the time for the Correct your spelling
safeguards
apartment
.One the factor
that captures the customers to buy a condo nowadays are inner design and decoration,a Change the noun form
factors
high class
Add a hyphen
high-class
apartment
would have
spend a lot of money for designers in order to impress buyers with a gorgeous and Add the particle
tohave
organizely
Correct your spelling
organized
space
.Eventhough
living in Correct your spelling
Even though
such
a modern building however
unfortunates can be happened such
as elevator stucking
or fire accidents.In order to Correct your spelling
stocking
maitain
the Correct your spelling
maintain
pretigous
for Correct your spelling
prestigious
previous
apartments
, the header of apartment
companies are endevouring
to find solutions to gain Correct your spelling
endeavouring
customers's
trust like regularly maintaining the Remove the s
customers'
apartment
's elevator is one of the good examples.
To conclude,in my opinion in future the advantages will outweight
the disadvantages of living in an Correct your spelling
outweigh
apartment
compare
to the standard of living in a Change the form of the verb
compared
house
and people
can foreseen
that Change the verb form
foresee
be foreseen
lands's
cost Remove the s
lands'
are
slowly rising so the price of houses probably increasesChange the verb form
is
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