some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment.

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decades
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houses
is
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the only place that
are
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suitable for family,as the world develops the
apartments
become eminent because they are affordable and more secure.Meanwhile,there some
people
prefer to live in a
house
so they can have
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their own
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own
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their own
space
.
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with,most
of
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houses
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are much more expensive compared to
apartments
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therefore
people
who are in shortage of money are
hardly
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to afford it.
However
,
people
who stay in a
house
can have their own garden to do some planting tasks.
Moreover
,living in a
house
probably have more
space
than an
apartment
so it is quite comfortable to have your own
space
.
Therefore
,
instead
of buying the same type of condos buyers can have any designs that fit their taste.
Eventhough
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Even though
living in a big
space
sounds interesting,but it needs more than 3
people
to live with because living alone in a
house
is not a thing that everyone could stand it.
Also
,the
cleanning
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cleaning
duties would be tougher because of plenty
spaces
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so the family has to do chores regularly. For the
apartments
,the
first
benefit you will gain is the cost of living.To illustrate,a
house
in Vietnam can up to minimum
9
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billions
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VND while an
apartment
in an enormous city just costs at minimum
3
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billions
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billion
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VND so a
house
's price is three times
compare
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to an
apartment
.
In addition
,living in an
apartment
may
does
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not have
sparing
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to spare
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of spaces but they are highly secure because there's always some shifting of
safe guards
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to operate all the time for the
apartment
.One the
factor
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factors
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that captures the customers to buy a condo nowadays are inner design and decoration,a
high class
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apartment
would
have
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spend a lot of money for designers in order to impress buyers with a gorgeous and
organizely
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organized
space
.
Eventhough
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Even though
living in
such
a modern building
however
unfortunates can be happened
such
as elevator
stucking
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stocking
or fire accidents.In order to
maitain
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maintain
the
pretigous
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prestigious
previous
for
apartments
, the header of
apartment
companies are
endevouring
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endeavouring
to find solutions to gain
customers's
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customers'
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trust like regularly maintaining the
apartment
's elevator is one of the good examples. To conclude,in my opinion in future the advantages will
outweight
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outweigh
the disadvantages of living in an
apartment
compare
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compared
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to the standard of living in a
house
and
people
can
foreseen
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that
lands's
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cost
are
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is
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slowly rising so the price of houses probably increases
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
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  • commutes
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