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In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach?

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Recently, it becomes more popular to take plastic
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 since
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 have become wealthier and their aesthetic appreciations have changed. For some
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, especially young adults, they often turn to it.
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,
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 brings both pros and cons. In the following essay, I will discuss the benefits of plastic
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 and the risks behind it. On the one hand, there are some advantages to turning to surgical methods. One obvious example can be viewed as a foundation of self-esteem. Some
people
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 who feel humble to their appearances and afraid to talk with others now have opportunities to change
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 situation. After modifying their outlook, they will be more confident, as well as improving their mental health.
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,
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 group can improve their interpersonal skills and relationships with colleagues by communicating more with others.
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, admittedly, a good appearance is more beneficial in the aspects of career, marriage, cooperation and so on.
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 there are numerous merits of turning to surgical operation, drawbacks of
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 method cannot be ignored.
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, it could be risky to take
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. If individuals were injured in the operation, the scar would accompany them for the rest of lifespan, which is a permanent hurt for all victims.
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, the potential of outlook becoming artificial after the surgical process is huge and physiognomy may be much worse than the original one.
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, it is a considerable expenditure for the family that has a relatively low income. Some of
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 group may use a bank loan to take the surgical procedure, which put a heavy financial burden on the whole family and exert a deleterious effect on their daily life. In conclusion, it is never easy to make up minds about changing appearance,
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, those
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 who are willing to turn to plastic
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 must consider the pros,
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 as the foundation of confidence, and cons,
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 as high price and risks of operations.
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