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Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?

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In
this
 entirely different kind of civilisation,
meat
 production needed maximum land than crop production
however
, few
people
 think that the land is becoming scarce
hence
meat
 consumption should be cut down globally. In
this
 essay, I would like to describe possible measures to decrease
meat
 consumption and the problems that might arise because of
this
.
Meat
 is the major source of
protein
 that's why many
people
 consume it to stay fit and healthy, especially athletes and sportspersons. In the need reducing
meat
 consumption one must focus on replacing
such
 a rich source of
protein
 with similar diet alternatives. The soybean, cow
milk
, buffellow's
milk
 and goat
milk
 can be condensed and concentrated to serve the
protein
 requirement of a person. Vegetable
protein
 can be transformed into a delicious one as
meat
 by adding artificial flavours to it. The idea of educating and making
people
 aware of the scarcity of land due to their food choices can be worked out. Of ,course every measure taken will come with a particular problem associated with it.
For instance
, sudden dietary change can cause multiple issues like stomach upset, loss of appetite and weakness in many
people
. Lactose intolerant individual will not be at all suitable candidate for substituting
meat
protein
 with the
milk
protein
.
People
 may deny the fact, in spite of educating because they are following a particular diet since birth and got habitual to it.
Moreover
, it is extremely difficult to get rid of a unique food habit.
Nevertheless
, the ecological balance will
also
 be in danger by means of
this
. In conclusion, I believe, after discussing the pros and cons, irrespective of the negatives one must focus on the best possible solution and
further
 research work should be done in a beneficial direction.
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