the best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of next generation. to what extent do to you agree or disagree.

Environmental degradation is a major threat to human existence. Activities
such
as Improper waste disposal and air pollution are major contributors, I strongly agree that if the government and individuals play their role to ensure
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hygiene, it will make
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a safer place for future occupants. Unwanted substances or byproducts should be discarded properly or recycled, to keep the environment free from harm. Research published by Health Today reports that a problem rife in the environment today is untidiness,
this
leads to unhealthy living conditions.
Furthermore
, air pollution is
also
a challenge that needs to be solved in order to keep
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in a good state for
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its habitants.
For instance
, China houses several manufacturing companies, during production there is
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the emission
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of smoke into the air,
this
has contributed to the depletion of the Ozone layer. According to environmentalists if
this
is not controlled it could lead to the total destruction of
this
layer, and
this
will not portend well for the future.
Government
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can play a substantial role in
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the world safe
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enlightening the populace of the importance of proper sewage disposal and
also
providing adequate amenities to recycle waste.
In addition
, Individuals
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Consumerism
  • Eco-friendly
  • Minimalism
  • Carbon footprint
  • Renewable resources
  • Conservation
  • Biodegradable
  • Deforestation
  • Emissions
  • Recycling
  • Upcycling
  • Sustainable development
  • Green technology
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecological balance
  • Overconsumption
  • Downshifting
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Climate change
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