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Through out history, it is found that male leaders had led world towards violence and conflicts. The world would be governed better and peacefully if female were leaders. What is your opinion

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since
 ancient times, human society is primarily dominated
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by men
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Therefore
 most of
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the leadership
leadership
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people view
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 for violent and chaotic world history and
hence
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female leadership
. I strongly do not believe in 
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 concept, as I view leadership as a gender independent skill. 
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these elements
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a tendency
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For example
, Many Kings & queens have invaded other realms on the pretext of
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either occupying
 land and resources or under the shadow of an egoistic cloud of the
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false assumption
false assumptions
 of their strength. We can take the entire 1st world war as an ideal example of
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this fact
. 
However
, These traits are not limited to male leaders.
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For instance
, there are many notable female presidents from South Asian countries,responsible for triggering violent wars which caused the death and destruction of
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their citizens
. It is equally true that leadership which brought prosperity to
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their subject
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also
 came from both sides of the aisle. Margaret Thatcher and Jawaharlal Nehru can be seen
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of this
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and rather
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 it is a
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person dependent
person dependant
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of human
 history it is tempting to blame them for all the sins of the past.
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 not true and
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leadership shall
 be seen from agender-neutral perspective.e seen from a gender-neutral perspective.
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