Through out history, it is found that male leaders had led world towards violence and conflicts. The world would be governed better and peacefully if female were leaders. What is your opinion

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ancient times, human society is primarily dominated
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by men
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the leadership
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people view
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for violent and chaotic world history and
hence
they promote
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female leadership
. I strongly do not believe in 
this
concept, as I view leadership as a gender independent skill. 
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gender as it is driven by two main elements grid and power. Both
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these elements
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a tendency
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For example
, Many Kings & queens have invaded other realms on the pretext of
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either occupying
land and resources or under the shadow of an egoistic cloud of the
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false assumption
false assumptions
of their strength. We can take the entire 1st world war as an ideal example of
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this fact
However
, These traits are not limited to male leaders.
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For instance
, there are many notable female presidents from South Asian countries,responsible for triggering violent wars which caused the death and destruction of
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their citizens
. It is equally true that leadership which brought prosperity to
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also
came from both sides of the aisle. Margaret Thatcher and Jawaharlal Nehru can be seen
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it is a
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person dependent
person dependant
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of human
history it is tempting to blame them for all the sins of the past.
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that is
not true and
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