Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

in flourish globe , technology is more
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powerful
than human. it is very
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useful
and same time it is overloaded in human life.
computer
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the computer
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is always prefer
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more
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priority
than
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a library
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. in
this
technology world , totally waste of money
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maintaining.
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shall put forth my arguments to support my views. The
first
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for anythings
such
as articles and read books or story
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extra
.
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we
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go somewhere and we need
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some write
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vertical
than we can open
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and search online .
furthermore
,we get
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myriad
articles on one page.
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we want .
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we are no needed for any kind of cards .
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if we go
first
time
library
we incumbent have
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on the other hand
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eye problem like blindness they could not
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they would only options
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.
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that person could not
use
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but they will
use
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. To put it in a
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,
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pen down saying that
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is not everywhere so
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government
should stop wasting money on
library
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government
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should spend more money on technology than
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blindness
business
people
also
can
use
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
  • distracted environment
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