Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
There is
section
of people, who think apartment living is beneficial Add an article
a section
the section
although
living in house
is still Add an article
the house
a house
preferred
choice to live by another section of Correct article usage
the preferred
population
. Though staying in a house provides complete independence and privacy to individuals, but it has drawbacks as people don’t feel part of Add an article
the population
community
and they get Add an article
the community
a community
Add the particle
to detach
detach
from society in my Change the form of the verb
detached
view point
.
Admittedly, there are few positive aspects of living in Correct your spelling
viewpoint
house
. Add an article
the house
a house
Firstly
, complete privacy and independence from neighbours and their visitors as there is no interference by them in your life. For instance
, when I moved to Mumbai from Jaipur, my next door
neighbours would constantly try to find about my whereabouts and would force start unnecessary conversations which used to be annoying. Add a hyphen
next-door
Secondly
, independent homes gives
you space to grow your own mini garden where you can grow plants and vegetables easily Change the verb form
give
on
your own backyard. Change preposition
in
Infact
, as per TOI’s property edition weekly page, there is almost Correct your spelling
In fact
25
% rise in Correct article usage
a 25
mini
garden with organic farming of vegetables in the lawns of independent Add an article
the mini
a mini
houses
Although
, I feel living in apartment
is beneficial to Add an article
an apartment
greater
extent as compared to Add an article
a greater
houses
because it gives comfort
of security and belongingness in society. As per Add an article
the comfort
population
census report of Correct article usage
the population
Government
of India, it was highlighted that as Correct article usage
the Government
nuclear
family concept and independent living has increased in Add an article
a nuclear
last
one decade more than 30% Correct article usage
the last
people
are suffering from Change preposition
of people
emotional
trauma of not part of Add an article
the emotional
community
. Another reason is Add an article
the community
a community
cost
of living in independent Add an article
the cost
houses
are enormous as there is high maintainance
of Correct your spelling
maintenance
such
property which falls on individual
owner completely. As per India’s largest home loan financing Correct article usage
the individual
company
HDFC Bank expenses incurred by those staying in apartments are 65% lesser compared to private Add a comma
,company
houses
as cost get shared among each tenants
.
To conclude, in my opinion too living in Change to a singular noun
tenant
apartment
is more advantageous as it reduces financial burden and builds community living as compared to those preferring to stay in Add an article
an apartment
houses
who live secluded life from society.Submitted by hdfctesting20 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...