Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in their country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people's interest in famous in the history of their country?

Never before has the world been so closely-connected and the mainstream
culture
thrives in every corner of the world.
Nevertheless
, many of the elder generations are calling the
youth
to pay attention back to those famous
people
in their
culture
instead
of
the
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international celebrities. In
this
essay, I will demonstrate the causes for the loss of interest for the
youth
and propose methods that could drive their focus back to those renowned individuals in
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history
. The main cause for which the
youth
are more familiar with
pop
stars is
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because
the modern
culture
florishing
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flourishing
nowadays is more exciting for
the
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them. Generally, the
youth
are more eager for passions and stimulations. With the help of modern technology, the newly generated cultures can
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the
youth
by providing more exciting contents. Take the movie industry as an example, movies could provide the audience with both auditory and visual experience.
By contrast
, the main way to learn from the
people
in the past is by reading relevant files and books, which is prone to be dull.
Thus
, the young generation tends to be exposed more
under
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the
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pop
culture
and become a fan of modern stars. Despite the fact that
pop
culture
is more attractive for the
youth
, there are still several ways by which we could attract their attention back to those prestigious
people
in their own
history
.
Firstly
, the authorities could try to produce more attracting contents,
such
as movies and documentaries to introduce renowned
people
in
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history
.
In addition
, it is necessary for the schools to extend the
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curriculum
and pay more
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focus
on
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history related
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courses, which could greatly improve students conscious
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the tradition. To put everything into consideration, the
youth
are more familiar with
the
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international celebrities since
the
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pop
culture
tends to bring more sensory stimulations.
Therefore
, by producing more valuable contents to introduce
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history
and increasing the teaching on
history
in school, we could increase the interests of the
youth
on our own
culture
as well as our renowned ancestors.
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