It is generally claimed that
must punish their
in order to learn how to choose wrong and
in today's complex society. Personally, I partially agree and disagree with
point of view for some reasons. To my view, there should not be a special
given to kids by their
.
There is no doubt true that
are compelled to teach their
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and don'ts so that they are the most responsible people for kids. To
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point, I agree that
are supposed to be punished for something they did wrong. Of course, they need to be warned
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beforehand,
, if they continue doing
again,
must punish them.
, I disagree
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some exceptional reasons. Everyone knows that drug addiction brings a disastrous life together to human beings.
, if a teenager hangs out with someone who uses drugs, in
regard,
do not have to punish him or her. It is because
might be
in
case, and they can run away from the house.
,
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life that how dangerous drugs are.
From my perspective, humans have to let their offspring experience whatever they are doing. To put it simply,
need to allow their
to choose wrong or
by themselves. They have to know what kinds of thing or behaviour are wrong or
. Only in
case, we will understand the gap between wrong and
.
, if an infant touches the fireplace, we should allow him or her to touch it because she or he will understand that it is dangerous while touching it.
that, there is not
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solution for all
,
, each
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has different personal characteristics.
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could not possibly work for everyone.
To conclude, sometimes I agree and disagree with the point of punishing
to learn the disparity between wrong and
. And I am inclined to believe that no type of
can be useful for all
, there might be someone who needs
to avoid doing wrong, or there may be some
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a reasonable explanation to deviate from wrong things.