Children have to be punished to learn the difference between right and wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents be able to give their children?

It is generally claimed that
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must punish their
children
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in order to learn how to choose wrong and
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in today's complex society. Personally, I partially agree and disagree with
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point of view for some reasons. To my view, there should not be a special
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given to kids by their
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. There is no doubt true that
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are compelled to teach their
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and don'ts so that they are the most responsible people for kids. To
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point, I agree that
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are supposed to be punished for something they did wrong. Of course, they need to be warned
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beforehand,
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, if they continue doing
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again,
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parents
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must punish them.
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, I disagree
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some exceptional reasons. Everyone knows that drug addiction brings a disastrous life together to human beings.
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, if a teenager hangs out with someone who uses drugs, in
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regard,
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do not have to punish him or her. It is because
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might be
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case, and they can run away from the house.
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,
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have to be near them to explain or illustrate
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life that how dangerous drugs are. From my perspective, humans have to let their offspring experience whatever they are doing. To put it simply,
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need to allow their
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to choose wrong or
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by themselves. They have to know what kinds of thing or behaviour are wrong or
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. Only in
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case, we will understand the gap between wrong and
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.
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, if an infant touches the fireplace, we should allow him or her to touch it because she or he will understand that it is dangerous while touching it.
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that, there is not
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solution for all
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, each
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children
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has different personal characteristics.
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why
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punishment
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could not possibly work for everyone. To conclude, sometimes I agree and disagree with the point of punishing
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to learn the disparity between wrong and
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. And I am inclined to believe that no type of
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can be useful for all
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, there might be someone who needs
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to avoid doing wrong, or there may be some
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who
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a reasonable explanation to deviate from wrong things.

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